Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và dùng từ đúng. Bạn nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes, I did) rồi nêu lí do cụ thể, tránh lỗi phát âm/viết như "bars" vs "parks" hay "bath" vs "park". Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, and). Ví dụ cụ thể (như hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên) sẽ giúp điểm tăng.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my parents on Sundays because we would have a picnic and play games. I remember feeding the ducks and playing on the swings, which made those visits very enjoyable.

Sugestão: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu người bạn thường đi cùng và tần suất. Sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (still like going to the park; with my sister, not "my still my sister"). Dùng 2–3 câu, liên từ (and, but) để nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động hiện tại.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I still enjoy going to the park, usually with my sister rather than my parents. We often go there at weekends to walk and relax.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên nói rõ có hay không muốn thêm công viên, nêu lý do (ví dụ: thiếu không gian xanh, nơi cho trẻ em chơi) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh tiếng lắp, dùng câu đơn giản có liên từ như because or so để giải thích ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because there are few green spaces where children can play safely. For example, new parks could have playgrounds and benches for families to relax.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khó hiểu và không cung cấp thông tin cụ thể. Nên nêu tên hoặc loại công viên bạn muốn đến (ví dụ: lớn hơn, có hồ, có khu vui chơi), và lý do rõ ràng (relaxation, exercise, for children). Giữ 2–3 câu, tránh lặp từ và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng như "I would like to go to... because...".

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit a large city park with a lake and walking paths in the future because it would be a good place to exercise and relax. I think my children would enjoy the playgrounds too.

× Yes I dis I like going to the bars at a AS as a child because I often go to the bath with my parents in Sunday.

✓ Yes, I used to like going to the parks as a child because I often went to the park with my parents on Sundays.

The original sentence has multiple problems: incorrect words ('dis', 'bars', 'AS', 'bath') and wrong verb tenses/structures. Use 'used to' to express past habitual action and simple past 'went'. Use correct nouns 'parks' and preposition 'on Sundays'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestions: replace wrong words with intended words, use 'used to' for past habits, use simple past for completed past actions, and use 'on' with days.'

× Yes I do I I still like go into the bar. No with my parents and my still my sister.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park, not with my parents but with my sister.

Errors include wrong verb form after 'like' (use gerund 'going'), incorrect preposition 'into' for visiting a park, and confusing negatives. Use present simple to state a current preference and gerund after 'like'. Also fix conjunctions and pronoun order. Suggestions: use 'like + -ing', use 'to the park', and structure clauses clearly (e.g. 'not with X but with Y').

× I like to see a play girl eat biscuit and the and module, umm, play, uh, a game.

✓ I would like to see children playing, eating biscuits, and playing games.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'would like to' for polite desire and gerunds for ongoing actions ('playing', 'eating'). Use plural 'children' if referring to kids in parks and parallel structure for the list. Suggestions: use parallel gerund forms and plural nouns where appropriate.'

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✓ Yes. I hope there will be more parks in the future because they will benefit many children.

The original is largely unintelligible with wrong auxiliaries and word choice. Use 'I hope' to express a desire, 'there will be' for future existence, and 'benefit' to show a positive effect on children. Keep sentence concise and coherent. Suggestions: use simple future 'there will be', clear subject-verb-object order, and proper vocabulary like 'benefit' and 'children'.