Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct past tense and fix articles and word order (e.g., "when I was a child", "we had a field in front of our house"). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to parks much when I was a child. I grew up in a rural area where there was an open field in front of our house, so my cousins and I played there instead of visiting formal parks.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and one clear reason using correct tense and fewer fillers. Replace "play" with a more appropriate verb if you mean "visit" or "spend time". Use linking words to connect your reason (e.g., "because" or "so").

Exemplo: Not really; I rarely go to parks now because I am busy with work and other responsibilities, so I prefer to relax at home or exercise near my workplace.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain why with one or two specific reasons. Correct grammar (e.g., "children playing", "I didn't have that as a child"). Remove repetitions and unclear tense shifts.

Exemplo: Yes, I'd love to see more parks in my city because they give children safe places to play and help build a sense of community. I didn't have many park options when I was young, so I think new parks would be beneficial.

Sugestão: Give a direct, specific answer with an example. Instead of repeating phrases, state one or two concrete places you want to visit and why. Use future phrasing correctly (e.g., "I'd like to visit parks in other countries, especially...").

Exemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit famous parks in other countries, for example Central Park in New York to see its urban landscape and Hyde Park in London to experience its historical atmosphere.

× No, I haven't tried going to a park when I was child because I actually live in a province and we have in just in front of our home.

✓ No, I didn't try going to parks when I was a child because I actually lived in a province and we had one just in front of our home.

The original mixes present perfect ('haven't tried') with a specific past time ('when I was a child'), which requires simple past ('didn't try'). 'When I was child' is missing the article 'a'. Also present tense 'live' should be past 'lived' to match the past timeframe, and 'we have in just in front of our home' is ungrammatical; use 'we had one just in front of our home' to refer to a park or field in the past.

× We have actually a white field where we used to play with my cousins.

✓ We actually had a white field where I used to play with my cousins.

In the context of past habits, use past tense 'had' rather than 'have'. Also 'we used to play with my cousins' is awkward because the subject 'we' and 'my' clash; better to say 'I used to play with my cousins' or 'we used to play together'. Here 'I used to play with my cousins' clarifies the speaker's habit.

× No, I don't play anymore because I'm already an adult and I I have priorities to do aside from playing at work instead of playing in a park.

✓ No, I don't play anymore because I'm an adult and I have other priorities at work instead of playing in a park.

'I'm already an adult' is acceptable but 'already' is unnecessary; simplified to 'I'm an adult'. 'I I' is a repetition error. 'Priorities to do aside from playing at work' is awkward; 'other priorities at work' is more natural. Keep present simple for current habits.

× Yes, I'd love to. It's nice to see children's playing in a park, enjoying their time as a child where I never never used to do when I was when I am still.

✓ Yes, I'd love to. It's nice to see children playing in a park, enjoying their childhood, which I never experienced when I was a child.

'Children's playing' incorrectly uses possessive; use 'children playing'. 'Their time as a child' is better expressed as 'their childhood'. 'Where I never never used to do when I was when I am still' is ungrammatical and confused in tense; replace with 'which I never experienced when I was a child' to indicate a past lack of experience. Also remove the repeated 'never'.

× I love to, I like, I'd love to try the parks in other countries and try and.

✓ I'd love to visit parks in other countries and try them out.

The original is repetitive and incomplete ('try and' ends the sentence). Use the conditional 'I'd love to' plus base verb 'visit' to express desire to go in the future. 'Try them out' completes the idea of experiencing those parks.