Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense (past) and smooth linking words (for example, because, where). Aim for 2–4 sentences. Pronunciation pauses (filled pauses like “uh” or repeated words) should be minimized.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were a safe place to play. I often went with my parents and friends, where we would play on the swings and have picnics. These visits helped me make close childhood memories.

Sugestão: Use a clear present-tense statement and avoid filler words. Give a specific reason and an example of what you do there. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now because they help me relax. If I have free time, I usually sit on a bench and read or walk along the paths, which helps me relieve stress and clear my mind.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases and be more precise. Start with a direct answer, then give one or two specific benefits of more parks (health, community space, cleaner air) with linking words (for example, furthermore, because). Keep sentences grammatically correct and complete.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide public spaces for exercise and socialising. For example, more green areas would encourage people to walk or cycle, reduce pollution, and improve residents’ mental health.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid unnecessary repetition of place names. Provide one specific reason why you want to visit and perhaps mention an activity you would like to do there. Use linking words such as because or since to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I’d love to visit Central Park in New York because it is famous and very large. I’ve seen many photos online and I’d like to walk around the lakes and visit the Conservatory Garden when I go there.

× Yes, when I was a child I, I like going to the park.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked going to the park.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb should be in past tense. Use 'liked' instead of 'like' to match the time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for habitual actions in the past (I liked going to the park).

× I, I go into the park.

✓ I used to go to the park.

The speaker is describing past habitual action. Using present simple 'go' is incorrect for past context. Replace with 'used to go' or past simple 'went' to indicate habitual past action. Also 'go into the park' is odd; 'go to the park' is more natural.

× I, I go to the park with my parents and friends.

✓ I used to go to the park with my parents and friends.

This describes habitual action in the past, so past tense is required. Use 'used to go' or 'went' rather than present 'go' to match the past time frame.

× We can have some chat in the parks and enjoy the, the environment in the parks so.

✓ We could have chats in the park and enjoy the park's environment.

'Have some chat' is unidiomatic; use 'have chats' or 'chat'. Use singular 'park' if referring to parks generally, or 'the parks' consistently. 'Environment in the parks' is better as 'park's environment' or 'the environment of the park'. Also modal 'can' in past context should be 'could' or rephrase to past habitual. Suggestion: keep number and prepositions consistent and use natural collocations ('have a chat', 'park environment').

× Yeah, I still like going to the park now, uh, if I have some free time, I will go to the park and just enjoy myself and enjoy the environment in the park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park now. If I have some free time, I go to the park and enjoy myself and the park's environment.

The first clause is fine, but mixing 'if I have' with 'I will go' is acceptable for future prediction, however for habitual present it's better to use present simple 'I go' to indicate regular behavior. Also 'enjoy the environment in the park' is wordy; 'enjoy the park's environment' is more natural. Keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× I can relieve my stress and just sit there and think, think nothing so.

✓ I can relieve my stress by sitting there and not thinking about anything.

'Sit there and think, think nothing' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'not thinking about anything' or 'clear my mind'. 'Can relieve my stress' is fine; improve the verb phrase and word order for clarity.

× Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks provide parks provide people a public spaces for the people.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks provide people with public spaces.

Repeating 'parks provide' is an error. The verb 'provide' requires 'people with' or 'provide a ... for people'. Also 'a public spaces' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'public spaces' without 'a'. Use 'would like' correctly as modal phrase for desire.

× So if the cities have more park, we can enjoy the city's environment and relieve the stress and.

✓ So if the city had more parks, we could enjoy the city's environment and relieve stress.

Tense and number issues: 'cities have more park' is incorrect. If speaking about own city, use 'the city' and plural 'parks'. Conditional phrasing about desire fits better with subjunctive/conditional: 'if the city had more parks, we could...' Also 'relieve the stress' should be 'relieve stress' (no article) or 'relieve our stress'. Remove trailing 'and'.

× Yes, I want to go to the Central Park in the New York City.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Central Park in New York City.

Use the proper name 'Central Park' without 'the' and 'New York City' without 'the'. 'The New York City' is incorrect. 'Central Park in New York City' is the standard form.

× So the park, the New York, the Central Park in the New York is quite famous and I just see it in the pictures on the Internet.

✓ Central Park in New York is quite famous, and I have only seen it in pictures on the Internet.

Avoid repeated articles and nouns. Use present perfect 'have seen' to indicate experience up to now. 'In the pictures on the Internet' is better as 'in pictures on the Internet' or 'in photos online'. Also do not repeat 'the New York'.

× So I really want to go to there in the future.

✓ So I really want to go there in the future.

Use 'go there' not 'go to there'. 'There' already contains the prepositional meaning, so adding 'to' is redundant and ungrammatical.