Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ нуждается в большей естественности и точности. Избегайте вводных фраз вроде «That's a very interesting question» — экзаменатор ждет прямого ответа. Используйте чёткое тематическое предложение, затем одно-два уточняющих предложения с конкретными деталями (например, какие именно активности отсутствовали). Исправьте грамматические ошибки: «there wasn't a lot of things» → «there weren't many things»; «to go in parks» → «to go to parks». Поддерживайте общий объём до 3–4 предложений.

Exemplo: Not really. There were several small parks near my street, but they lacked equipment and activities, so I rarely went there. For example, there were no playgrounds or sports facilities, which made the parks boring for children.

Sugestão: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и кратким, убрать повторения («My point of view changed» сказано дважды) и исправить форму «As as time passed away». Начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте конкретные примеры, используя связки («because», «for example», «so») и корректную грамматику («hanging with my friends» → «hanging out with my friends»). Не превышайте 4 предложений.

Exemplo: Yes, my opinion has changed and I now enjoy going to parks. I like them because there are many activities available, such as jogging paths and outdoor gyms. I especially enjoy hanging out with my friends there on weekends.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит ошибки в обращении («your city» вместо «my city»), грамматике и формулировке («little siblings» лучше «young siblings»), а также лишние паузы («uh»). Дайте непосредственный ответ, объясните причину и приведите конкретику (где именно не хватает парков, какие объекты нужны). Исправьте множественное/единственное число: «a bigger parks» → «bigger parks» или «a bigger park».

Exemplo: Yes. As I have young siblings, I would like more parks in my city because we currently have few safe play areas. For example, new parks with playgrounds and shaded seating would make it easier for families to spend time outside.

Sugestão: Начните прямо и избегайте разговорных вводных («I'll be honest with you»). Уточните, почему именно этот парк привлекает, дайте конкретные детали (аттракционы, атмосфера) и исправьте языковые ошибки («watching a lot of YouTubers going to the and» → «watching many YouTubers visit it»). Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений.

Exemplo: I haven't planned specific parks, but if I could choose one I would visit Disneyland. It appeals to me because of its famous attractions and immersive atmosphere. For example, I would love to experience the themed rides and parades that I have seen in many YouTube videos.

× I had a lot of parks in my street, but there wasn't a lot of things to do.

✓ I had a lot of parks on my street, but there weren't a lot of things to do.

Subject 'a lot of things' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'were' not 'was'. Use 'on my street' rather than 'in my street' for natural English. Suggestion: Use 'there weren't a lot of things' and 'on my street'.

× That's why I didn't like to go in parks as a child.

✓ That's why I didn't like to go to parks as a child.

The correct verb-preposition collocation is 'go to (a) park' or 'go to parks'. 'Go in parks' is unnatural. Suggestion: Use 'go to parks' or 'go to the park' depending on context.

× As as time passed away I would say my point of view changed.

✓ As time went by, I would say my point of view changed.

Redundant 'as as' is incorrect. 'Passed away' usually refers to dying; use 'went by' or 'passed' for time. Tense 'would say' is acceptable but 'I would say my view changed' fits past reference. Suggestion: Remove duplicate 'as' and replace 'passed away' with 'went by'.

× There are a lot of things to do, so if I had to choose one thing to do in the parks, I would say hanging with my friends.

✓ There are a lot of things to do, so if I had to choose one thing to do in the parks, I would say hanging out with my friends.

Use the phrasal verb 'hang out with' rather than 'hanging with'. 'Hanging with' is informal and missing 'out'. Maintain gerund after 'would say'. Suggestion: Use 'hanging out with my friends'.

× As someone who has little siblings, I would say yes.

✓ As someone who has young siblings, I would say yes.

'Little siblings' is nonstandard in English; the correct adjective is 'young' when describing age. 'Little' can be used but 'young' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'young siblings'.

× I would like to see more parks in your city.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

The student is speaking about their own city; using 'your city' is a wrong pronoun. Use 'my city' to indicate possession. Suggestion: Say 'my city' when referring to the speaker's city.

× we don't have a lot of parks in the terrace, so it would be nice if there was a bigger parks for children.

✓ we don't have a lot of parks in the area, so it would be nice if there were bigger parks for children.

'The terrace' is likely incorrect context; 'area' or 'neighborhood' fits. 'Parks' is plural, so use plural adjective 'bigger parks' not 'a bigger parks'. Also after 'if' with subjunctive, use 'were' not 'was' for hypothetical plural. Suggestion: Use 'in the area' and 'if there were bigger parks'.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× I'll be honest with you, I have never thought about this but if I had to choose only one I would say Disneyland.

✓ I'll be honest with you, I have never thought about this, but if I had to choose only one I would say Disneyland.

Add a comma before 'but' to separate clauses for clarity. Tense use is acceptable: present perfect for 'have never thought' and conditional 'would say'. Suggestion: Insert comma for clarity.

× Disneyland is one of the largest parks in the world and since I was a child I was watching a lot of Youtubers going to the and that's the reason I want to go there.

✓ Disneyland is one of the largest parks in the world, and since I was a child I have watched a lot of YouTubers going there, and that's the reason I want to go.

Problems: missing article/object after 'going to the' — delete 'the' or specify. Use present perfect 'have watched' to indicate repeated past actions continuing to present. 'YouTubers' capitalization standardized. Remove redundant final 'there' after 'go' or keep 'go there'. Suggestion: Use 'I have watched a lot of YouTubers going there' or 'I have watched many YouTubers visit Disneyland'.