Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and use correct tense and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar issues (use past tense for childhood) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played tag and climbed trees there, which helped me stay active and make friends.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use natural expressions for stress relief and correct word order. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about frequency and reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relieve stress and feel relaxed. However, I usually visit them only at weekends because I am busy with work during weekdays.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and more specific. Use linking words (for example, therefore) and avoid vague phrasing. Mention concrete benefits and perhaps one example of how more parks would help the community.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they would provide easy, nearby places for both children and adults to exercise. For instance, parents could take young children to play safely after school, which would improve community health.

Sugestão: Use clearer structure and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer, then give reasons with linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'spend me time'; be specific about local parks and intended activities.

Exemplo: No, I don't have a particular park in mind, but I would like to visit more parks in my neighborhood in the near future because they help me relax and reduce stress. I plan to go for short walks and read on a bench when I have free time.

× I like going to parks as a child because I think parks are meant to be relaxed and they are meant for enjoying your day.

✓ I liked going to parks as a child because I thought parks were meant to be relaxing and for enjoying your day.

The sentence uses present tense ('like', 'think', 'are meant') while referring to childhood, which requires past tense. Change verbs to past tense for consistency. Also 'relaxed' describes a person or atmosphere awkwardly; 'relaxing' correctly describes things that cause relaxation. Use 'for enjoying your day' -> 'for enjoying your day' is acceptable but 'and for enjoying your day' clarifies purpose. Suggestion: Use past tense when talking about past habits ('I liked', 'I thought') and use correct adjective form ('relaxing').

× Also, as a child it is important to engage in some physical activities and parks are the better option to play or to run up.

✓ Also, as a child it was important to engage in some physical activities, and parks were the best places to play or run.

Talking about childhood requires past tense ('is' -> 'was'). 'The better option' is comparative and needs context; 'the best places' fits general preference. 'To run up' is incorrect phrasing; use 'to run'. Remove unnecessary infinitive 'to' before 'play'.

× Yes, I still like going to parks because I think my stress is really used after going there and my and I feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks because I think my stress is really reduced after going there and I feel relaxed.

The clause 'my stress is really used' is ungrammatical; correct verb is 'reduced' to indicate decrease. Remove duplicated words 'my and'. Maintain present tense since this refers to current feelings. Ensure subject 'I' is followed by correct verb 'feel'. Suggestion: Use 'reduced' or 'relieved' to describe stress decreasing.

× But now I like going parks only on weekends because I am busy at weekdays.

✓ But now I like going to parks only on weekends because I am busy on weekdays.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'going' should be 'going to parks'. Use preposition 'on' with 'weekdays' rather than 'at'. Maintain present tense for current habit.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because I think having a park in every locality makes easier for children and for adults to reach and to exercise their.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I think having a park in every locality makes it easier for children and adults to get there and exercise.

Use conditional/modal 'would like' to express desire politely. 'Makes easier' needs an object 'it' -> 'makes it easier'. 'To reach and to exercise their' is incorrect: 'reach' needs an object 'get there' and 'their' is wrong possessive; use no possessive. Simplify infinitive usage: 'to get there and exercise'. Suggestion: Use 'would like' for preferences and include dummy 'it' after 'makes'.

× Also, children like to play in parks a lot after doing their homework or after going to school.

✓ Also, children like to play in parks a lot after doing their homework or after going to school.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× No I don't want to go in future in any particular one park but I prefer going parks in my locality in near future because I found myself relaxed and also my stress is reduced after going to parks and I spend me time there.

✓ No, I don't want to go to any particular park in the future, but I prefer going to parks in my neighborhood in the near future because I find myself relaxed, my stress is reduced after going to parks, and I spend time there.

Multiple errors: use 'to' with 'go to any particular park'. Place 'in the future' after noun phrase. 'Going parks' needs 'going to parks'. 'Locality' more naturally 'neighborhood'. Tense should be present/future: 'I find myself relaxed' and 'my stress is reduced' -> present simple fits habitual effect ('my stress is reduced' is acceptable but 'my stress is reduced after going to parks' can be rephrased as 'my stress is reduced' present passive). 'I spend me time' incorrect pronoun 'me' should be 'time by myself' or 'I spend time there'. Suggestion: Use 'I spend time there' or 'I spend time by myself there' for clarity.