Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer with tense and grammar, give a concise topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Use correct past tense and fix articles and agreement. Limit to up to 5 sentences and use a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. For example, I used to run and play on the grass, which improved my physical fitness, and I often sat quietly reading or daydreaming, which helped my thinking and creativity.

Sugestão: Correct small mistakes and make sentences more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid sentence fragments and redundant phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Nowadays I often spend an hour there after work to relax and reflect, which helps me clear my mind and prepares me to be more productive the next day.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion with correct grammar and add a concrete reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and correct verb forms and article use.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because each park offers a different atmosphere. For example, a small neighborhood park might be peaceful for reading, while a larger park can host sports and community events.

Sugestão: Be more direct and grammatically accurate. Use present or future tense consistently and provide a specific example or preference if possible. Keep it concise and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'however'.

Exemplo: I don't have a specific park in mind right now because I feel every park is special in its own way. However, if I had to choose, I would like to visit a large botanical garden in the future to learn about different plants and relax in a quieter setting.

× Yes, I like going to park when I was in my childhood because it get me an physical health and improve my thinking skills.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because it gave me physical health benefits and improved my thinking skills.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'; 'going to park' needs plural or article: 'going to parks' or 'going to the park' — 'parks' fits general meaning; 'it get me an physical health' is wrong: use past 'gave me', remove 'an' before 'physical health', and use 'physical health benefits' for clarity; 'and improve' should be past 'improved' to match past timeframe. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when referring to childhood and correct noun phrases and verb forms.

× Yeah, I still like going to parks. Now I take a few hours off my daily routine to go apart and think and improve my skills and. And try to be a better next day.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks. Now I take a few hours off my daily routine to go to a park to think and improve my skills and try to be better the next day.

Issues: 'Yeah' is informal but acceptable; 'go apart' is incorrect preposition/word — should be 'go to a park'. 'and.' is an incomplete fragment; combine clauses and remove extra 'And'. 'be a better next day' is incorrect article and word order — use 'be better the next day'. Keep present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'go to a park', remove sentence fragments, and correct 'the next day'.

× Yeah, I like to see more parks in my city because I think that every park had the different atmosphere and different energy in their surroundings.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I think that every park has a different atmosphere and different energy in its surroundings.

Problems: 'Yeah, I like to see' is awkward for preference — 'I would like to see' or 'I like seeing' fits better; tense 'had' is past but context is present — use 'has'. 'the different atmosphere' should be 'a different atmosphere' (article error). 'their surroundings' uses plural pronoun 'their' for singular 'park' — use 'its surroundings' for singular. Suggestion: use correct tense and singular agreement and choose appropriate articles.

× I didn't have any perks in my mind to be visited in the future because I think and I believe that every park are special and every park says their own atmosphere, which help to improve ourselves.

✓ I don't have any particular parks in mind that I want to visit in the future because I think every park is special and every park has its own atmosphere, which helps us improve.

Multiple errors: 'I didn't have' is past but question asks about future plans — use present 'I don't have'. 'perks' is wrong word; use 'parks' or 'particular parks'. 'in my mind to be visited' is unnatural — use 'in mind that I want to visit'. 'every park are special' is subject-verb agreement error — 'park is'. 'every park says their own atmosphere' is incorrect verb and pronoun — use 'has its own atmosphere'. 'which help to improve ourselves' needs subject-verb agreement and more natural phrasing — 'which helps us improve'. Suggestion: use present tense for current intentions, correct noun choice, fix subject-verb agreement and pronouns, and simplify relative clause.