Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and logically ordered. Start with a clear topic sentence describing whether you liked parks, then add one or two specific supporting details (what you did and a brief reason), using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and filler sounds (uh, I, I).

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. For example, when I was eight I wanted to try several rides, but I was often too short for them. Because of that I usually played on smaller swings or watched the "crazy train" ride until I could try it.

Sugestão: Give a direct, current opinion first, then add a specific reason and a conditional possibility. Use correct tense and reduce hesitations. Provide one concrete example of what you would try to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Not really — I don't go to parks as much now because I'm older and prefer other activities like cafes or the gym. However, if I had the chance to try new attractions or a themed park, I would definitely go to experience something different.

Sugestão: Respond clearly and support your opinion with a specific reason and an expected result. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., reduce pollution) and linkers (‘because’, ‘so’, ‘therefore’). Avoid vague phrases like 'requiring thing of myself'.

Exemplo: Yes, I would — because our city has serious air pollution, more parks would help improve air quality and provide green spaces for people to relax. For instance, planting trees in new parks could reduce dust and make neighborhoods healthier.

Sugestão: Give a clear, specific example of a park or place you want to visit and explain why. If you are unsure of names, describe distinctive features (e.g., waterfalls, themed landscape). Use simple correct sentences rather than questions to the examiner.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the themed gardens inspired by the movie Avatar in Shanghai because they have dramatic landscapes and colourful plants. I think walking through those areas would be a unique and relaxing experience.

× Yes, I do when I was 8, I, I want to go the parks and some kind of like the things.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was 8, I wanted to go to parks and try different things.

The sentence mixes present and past tense ('I do' with 'when I was 8'). Use past tense for past habits: 'did' and 'wanted'. Also use 'go to parks' (preposition 'to') and 'try different things' (clearer noun phrase). Use article 'the' only if referring to specific parks.

× However I was too short for that thing.

✓ However, I was too short for that ride.

The original is grammatical but 'that thing' is vague. For parks, 'ride' is more appropriate. No -ing form needed; comma added for clarity.

× I want to, uh, try on some trains, uh, crazy train.

✓ I wanted to try some rides, like the Crazy Train.

Use past 'wanted' to match past time. 'Try on' is used for clothing; use 'try' for rides. Capitalize or treat 'Crazy Train' as a ride name. Present participle not required.

× OK, now I didn't 'cause I'm growing up, so I don't like that too much.

✓ Now I don't, because I'm grown up, so I don't like them as much.

Mix of past 'didn't' and present context. Use 'don't' and 'grown up' (past participle/adjective). 'That' should be 'them' referring to parks/rides; 'as much' is natural.

× If I had a chance to, uh, try some new things, yes, I will do.

✓ If I had a chance to try some new things, I would.

This is a conditional: use second conditional 'If I had a chance... I would' for hypothetical present. 'Will' is incorrect with past-tense conditional clause.

× Yes, of course that is actually requiring thing of myself for my country 'cause my country has a, uh, enormous air pollution.

✓ Yes, of course. I feel it is important for my country because we have severe air pollution.

Original has awkward pronoun use ('that' and 'myself'). Use 'I feel it is important' and 'we have' to refer to the country. 'Enormous air pollution' is acceptable but 'severe' is more natural.

× If more parks built, air pollution will solid.

✓ If more parks are built, air pollution will improve.

Missing auxiliary verb 'are' in passive construction; 'solid' is incorrect collocation for air quality. Use 'improve' as the expected result.

× Yes, I have. Do you know there are which countries?

✓ Yes, I do. Do you know which countries they are?

'I have' is vague; 'I do' answers 'Are there any parks you want to go to'. The question construction is incorrect; use 'which countries they are' or 'which countries' placed before verb: 'Do you know which countries they are?'."

× I don't remember that but I can express that which is like Avatars country, Avatar movie like it is in Shanghai maybe.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I can describe a place that looks like the country in the Avatar movie, maybe like the one in Shanghai.

Sentence is wordy and awkward. Use 'exactly' for 'remember that' and 'describe a place that looks like' for clarity. 'Avatar's country' should be 'the country in the Avatar movie'; add commas and restructure. Avoid repeated 'like'."}]} }}