Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and include a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific details. Use past tense consistently and correct vocabulary (e.g., "fly kites," "parks"). Avoid redundancy and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child, especially those with playgrounds. I often flew kites with my friends and enjoyed the fresh air and open space.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific reason using linking words (e.g., "but," "because"). Correct collocations ("heavy study load" instead of "heavy study job") and avoid repetition of "parks." Keep it to 2 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I rarely find time because my study load and exams are demanding. When I have free time, I like to relax there to relieve stress.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific benefits using linking words (e.g., "because," "for example"). Fix grammar ("they bring fresher air"), avoid wordiness ("different plants planted" → "various plants"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they add green space and improve air quality. For example, parks with trees and flower beds create pleasant landscapes and places for people to relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then specify the types of parks you want to visit with examples and correct grammar ("no specific park I want to go to," "waterfalls," "special plants"). Use linking words ("but," "for example") and keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I don't have a particular park in mind, but I'd like to visit different kinds of parks. For example, I want to see parks with waterfalls and those with rare plant collections because I enjoy nature and photography.

× Yes, I'd like to go to parks as a child, especially those parks with playground 'cause when I was a little girl I usually fly a kite in the parts and enjoy the fresh air and play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child, especially those with playgrounds, because when I was a little girl I usually flew a kite in the parks, enjoyed the fresh air, and played with my friends.

Multiple tense and verb-form errors: 'I'd like to go to parks as a child' mixes present conditional with a past time reference; use simple past 'liked' for past habit. 'playground' needs plural 'playgrounds' or omit article depending on meaning. 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'. 'fly' and 'enjoy' and 'play' should be past tense ('flew', 'enjoyed', 'played') to match 'when I was a little girl' and 'usually' describing a past habitual action. Also 'parts' is a typo for 'parks'. Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent for past habits by using simple past; correct typos and use standard connectors like 'because'.

× Actually I really like going to parks now, but due to the heavy study job and exams, I almost have no time to go to the parks.

✓ Actually I really like going to parks now, but due to heavy study commitments and exams, I almost have no time to go to parks.

'the heavy study job' is unnatural; use 'heavy study commitments' or 'a heavy study load'. 'the parks' is unnecessary when speaking generally; use 'parks' without the definite article. Tense is present and appropriate ('like' and 'have'), so adjust nouns and articles for natural English. Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('study commitments' or 'study load') and omit 'the' when referring to parks in general.

× Yes, of course I like to see more parks in my city because there are usually trees and different plants planted in the park and it bring fresher air and the beautiful landscapes in the city.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in my city because they usually have trees and various plants, and they bring fresher air and beautiful landscapes to the city.

'I like to see' is acceptable but 'would like to see' is more natural for preference. 'there are usually trees and different plants planted in the park' is wordy; use 'they usually have trees and various plants'. 'it bring' has subject-verb agreement error: plural subject ('they') requires 'bring', not 'bring' with singular 'it'. Also 'the beautiful landscapes in the city' should be 'beautiful landscapes to the city' or 'in the city'—here 'to the city' fits better. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree and use concise phrasing; use 'they' to refer back to 'parks'.

× Actually, there are no specific park that I want to go to in the future, but I want to visit different kinds of parks.

✓ Actually, there is no specific park that I want to go to in the future, but I want to visit different kinds of parks.

Subject-verb agreement and article/plural mismatch: 'there are no specific park' combines plural verb with singular noun. Use 'there is no specific park' (singular) or pluralize the noun: 'there are no specific parks'. Here 'no specific park' with 'is' fits the following singular reference. Suggestion: Match number between verb and noun: singular with 'is' and plural with 'are'.

× Sometimes there are waterfall in a park and sometimes there are different special plants in the park, and I really enjoy it.

✓ Sometimes there are waterfalls in a park, and sometimes there are different special plants in the park, and I really enjoy them.

'there are waterfall' is incorrect: use plural 'waterfalls' with 'there are'. 'the park' is acceptable if referring to a specific park, but 'in a park' was used earlier so keep consistency. 'I really enjoy it' is wrong because the antecedent is plural ('waterfalls' and 'plants'), so use 'them'. Suggestion: Use correct plural forms and ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.