Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid fillers. For example, say when you went, what activities you did, and why you enjoyed them.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I used to go there every weekend with my friends to play on the slides and swings, and we often rode the little tram around the park. Because we spent so much time playing together, the park felt exciting and friendly.

Sugestão: Give a direct clear response and complete sentences. Explain the reason concisely with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "although") and provide a brief example of how your feelings changed. Avoid trailing off and filler words.

Exemplo: Not as much as before, because the parks now feel quieter and I have different priorities. For example, when I was a child I went daily with friends to play, but now I prefer meeting friends at cafes or exercising instead.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific kinds of parks you would like, with reasons. Use clear linking words like "because" and avoid awkward phrases. Mention benefits for children or the community to show depth.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks, especially playgrounds for younger children and green spaces for families. For instance, a park with safe play equipment and picnic areas would encourage kids to play outdoors and help families spend time together.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer and briefly explain your priorities, using linking words. If possible, mention a park type you might visit in the future to show openness. Avoid vague phrasing and fillers.

Exemplo: Not at the moment, because I have other priorities like work and study. However, I might visit a large city park or botanical garden in the future if I have time and want to relax.

× Yes, I found very interesting to go parks when I was a child before because it sounds very entertaining to go apart and have fun with my friends like sliding and.

✓ Yes, I found it very interesting to go to parks when I was a child because it seemed very entertaining to go out and have fun with my friends, like sliding on the slides and riding the tram.

Errors: missing 'it' with 'find it interesting' (sentence structure), incorrect infinitive/gerund use, missing prepositions ('to parks', 'go out'), wrong noun 'apart' should be 'out', and omission after 'and' caused fragment. Suggestion: include the dummy pronoun 'it' after 'found', use 'to go to parks', replace 'apart' with 'out', complete the list of activities and use parallel structure (verb + object). Ensure verbs match past tense context ('found', 'seemed').

× Nowadays I find less, less entertaining to go parks because, uh, when I was a child, it had different vibe.

✓ Nowadays I find it less entertaining to go to parks because, when I was a child, they had a different vibe.

Errors: missing dummy 'it' for 'find it less entertaining' (sentence structure), missing preposition 'to' after 'go', and incorrect reference 'it' should agree with plural 'parks' so use 'they'. Suggestion: use 'find it less entertaining', 'go to parks', and match pronoun number to referent ('they' for parks).

× That's why, uh, I was continuing to go every day and uh, with my friends, it had different fun.

✓ That's why I used to go every day with my friends; it was more fun then.

Errors: awkward progressive 'was continuing to go' (use 'used to' for past habitual actions), misplaced commas and unnatural 'it had different fun'. Suggestion: use 'used to' for repeated past actions and rephrase 'it was more fun then' to clearly express comparison between past and present. Maintain subject-verb agreement and simple past context.

× Now I have.

✓ Now I don't anymore.

Errors: sentence fragment 'Now I have.' is incomplete and unclear. Suggestion: complete the thought to show contrast with past, e.g., 'Now I don't anymore' or 'Now I don't have time' depending on intended meaning. Use full clause with verb and object where needed.

× Yes, I would like to see different types of parks to get child's know like different entertaining areas with their friends.

✓ Yes, I would like to see different types of parks so children can experience different entertainment areas with their friends.

Errors: 'to get child's know' is ungrammatical and 'child's' should be plural 'children'. The phrase 'different entertaining areas' is awkward; use 'different entertainment areas'. Suggestion: rephrase purpose clauses with 'so' or 'so that' and use correct plural nouns ('children'), and use 'experience' or 'enjoy' for clarity.

× I don't have any plan like this because I have different priorities than entertain myself now and uh, I haven't thought to go like parks before.

✓ I don't have any plans like that because I have different priorities now, and I haven't thought about going to parks before.

Errors: 'plan' should be plural 'plans' or 'a plan'; 'than entertain myself' is ungrammatical—use 'than to entertain myself' or better 'because I have different priorities now'; 'haven't thought to go like parks before' is incorrect: use 'thought about going to parks before'. Also use present perfect 'haven't thought' with 'about'. Suggestion: say 'I don't have any plans like that' and 'I haven't thought about going to parks before' for correct collocations and prepositions.