Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp; tránh lỗi như “flying time” và “we met unforgettable memories”. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên) và kết luận ngắn gọn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Exemplo: Yes, I did enjoy going to parks as a child because my parents often took me there on weekends. I used to play games and climb trees with other neighbourhood children, which created many happy memories. Those afternoons are still some of my fondest childhood moments.

Sugestão: Cần sửa cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'going to park' → 'going to the park', 'recharge energy' → 'recharge my energy'); tránh câu rời rạc như câu ngắt 'After I get home.' Dùng từ liên kết để mạch lạc (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore') và thêm một câu ngắn nêu khả năng thay đổi thói quen trong tương lai.

Exemplo: I don't go to the park much these days because my studies and part-time job take up most of my time. When I get home, I usually need to do homework and prepare for the next day's classes, so I prefer to rest at home to recharge. However, if I have a free weekend, I might visit a park to get some fresh air.

Sugestão: Ý tưởng rõ ràng và có lý do hợp lý; cần sửa lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và số ít/nhớ (e.g., 'more park' → 'more parks', 'not only my city but across my country' → 'not only in my city but across the country'). Có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể liên quan cộng đồng để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks not only in my city but across the country. Parks provide green spaces and trees that improve air quality and help reduce pollution. For example, a new park near a busy road could give families and outdoor workers a nearby place to relax and escape the heat.

Sugestão: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và câu lắp (ví dụ: 'beautiful scenery to park' vô nghĩa; 'I'm most looking forward to visiting is...' sai cấu trúc). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề nêu địa điểm bạn muốn tới, tiếp theo nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao (cảnh quan, hoạt động) và kết bằng kế hoạch ngắn gọn. Giữ 2–3 câu chính xác và rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I would love to visit a large park with plenty of trees and beautiful scenery, such as Gardens by the Bay in Singapore. I'm eager to see its unique gardens and impressive structures, and I hope to travel there within the next few years. For now, I usually visit parks in my city when I have free time.

× I don't remember exactly, but I think I liked going to the park when I was a child because my parents took me there on weekends. I enjoy flying time with the other kids and we met unforgettable memories.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I think I liked going to the park when I was a child because my parents took me there on weekends. I enjoyed spending time with the other kids and we made unforgettable memories.

'enjoy' should be 'enjoyed' to keep past tense consistent with 'liked' and 'took'. 'flying time' is incorrect collocation; the correct phrase is 'spending time'. 'met unforgettable memories' is ungrammatical; use 'made unforgettable memories' to express creating memories.

× I don't think I enjoy going to park anymore because studying and my part time job take up most of my time. After I get home. I still have to do my homework and prepare for the next days classes. If I have free time left, I could rather stay at home and relax to recharge energy instead of going to the park.

✓ I don't think I enjoy going to the park anymore because studying and my part-time job take up most of my time. After I get home, I still have to do my homework and prepare for the next day's classes. If I have free time left, I would rather stay at home and relax to recharge my energy instead of going to the park.

Missing article: 'going to park' should be 'going to the park' (definite article needed). 'part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as adjective. 'After I get home.' is a sentence fragment; combine with following clause or use comma. 'next days classes' needs possessive: 'next day's classes'. Modal 'could rather' is incorrect; use 'would rather'. 'recharge energy' needs possessive 'my energy'. These changes correct article, punctuation, possessive, modal and sentence structure errors.

× Definitely, I would like to see more park not only my city but across my country. More parks provide clean space and trees, help improve air quality and reduce pollution. They also offer a comfortable place for people who work outdoors to relax and cool down during hot weather.

✓ Definitely, I would like to see more parks not only in my city but across my country. More parks provide clean spaces and trees, help improve air quality, and reduce pollution. They also offer comfortable places for people who work outdoors to relax and cool down during hot weather.

'more park' should be plural 'more parks'. Missing preposition 'in' before 'my city'. 'clean space' and 'a comfortable place' are uncountable/count mismatch in context; better as plural 'clean spaces' and 'comfortable places' to match 'more parks'. Added commas for clarity and parallel structure.

× Of course, I would love to visit a larger park with plenty of trees and beautiful scenery to park. I'm most looking forward to visiting is Garden by the Bay in Singapore. I hope I can travel there in the near future. However, for the time being, I will continue the park in my city.

✓ Of course, I would love to visit a larger park with plenty of trees and beautiful scenery to enjoy. The place I'm most looking forward to visiting is Gardens by the Bay in Singapore. I hope I can travel there in the near future. However, for the time being, I will continue visiting parks in my city.

'scenery to park' is incorrect; likely meant 'scenery to enjoy' (verb choice). Sentence 'I'm most looking forward to visiting is Garden by the Bay in Singapore.' is ungrammatical; rephrased to 'The place I'm most looking forward to visiting is Gardens by the Bay in Singapore.' Note proper name is 'Gardens by the Bay'. 'I will continue the park in my city' is incorrect; use 'continue visiting parks in my city' to express ongoing action and correct verb and plural noun.