Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms and reduce repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played games like hide-and-seek with my friends, and we also ran around and did simple exercises. Because I enjoyed outdoor activities and sunshine, I spent most afternoons there.

Sugestão: Make a direct statement about the present, use correct tense and clearer organization. Use linking words (for example, also, and) and provide specific examples rather than fragments.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, on weekends I play badminton with a friend and take walks with my dog. I also like to relax there and watch people, which makes my free time pleasant.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Use specific reasons and correct collocations (e.g., “green spaces,” “spend their spare time”). Keep sentences cohesive with linking words like because and for example.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and offer places for relaxation. For example, new parks would give people spots to read, draw, exercise and socialize.

Sugestão: Be specific about which park and why. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing; avoid vague fragments. Mention one or two concrete features you expect and link them to personal plans.

Exemplo: Yes, I plan to visit a new park that is being built near my hometown. It will have modern facilities and a pet-friendly area, so I look forward to taking my dog there for walks and meeting other pet owners.

× Yes, I really like to go to the park with my friends to pay, hide and seek.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to the park with my friends to play hide-and-seek.

The student is describing childhood habits, so past tense is appropriate. 'Like to go' can be natural but 'liked going' fits past reference. 'Pay' is a spelling error for 'play'. 'Hide and seek' should be hyphenated as 'hide-and-seek'. Use 'play hide-and-seek' to form a correct verb phrase.

× Also have another activities.

✓ We also had other activities.

The original sentence lacks a subject and correct verb form. For past description use 'we had' or 'I had'. 'Another activities' is ungrammatical: use 'other activities'. Provide a subject and past tense verb to match the context.

× I like to run and do some exercise.

✓ I liked to run and do some exercises.

Because the question asks about childhood, past tense 'liked' is more appropriate. 'Exercise' in this context is countable plural when referring to multiple activities, so 'exercises' or 'exercise' as an uncountable general activity is acceptable; 'exercises' clarifies multiple activities.

× I like sport, I like outdoor activities, I like sunshine.

✓ I liked sports, outdoor activities, and sunshine.

Consistency and parallel structure are needed. Use plural 'sports' rather than singular 'sport' when speaking generally. Use past tense 'liked' to match childhood context and add conjunctions for natural listing.

× So I love go to park very much.

✓ So I loved going to the park very much.

After 'love' when speaking in past habitual context use past 'loved' and the gerund 'going'. Also include the article 'the' before 'park'.

× When we have free time I like to go to park, I will play badminton with my friend, also can take a walk with my dog, eat his a interesting activities especially in weekend.

✓ When we had free time, I liked to go to the park; I would play badminton with my friends, take a walk with my dog, and do interesting activities, especially on weekends.

This long sentence mixes tenses and has several errors. For past habits use past tense or 'would' for habitual past actions. Add articles: 'the park'. 'I will play' is future; use 'I would play' or 'I played'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' if general. 'Eat his a interesting activities' is ungrammatical; likely 'do interesting activities'. Use 'on weekends' for repeated occasions. Add punctuation for clarity.

× I like spend.

✓ I liked spending time there.

The fragment 'I like spend' is missing proper verb form. Use the gerund 'spending' after 'like' and past tense 'liked' to reflect childhood. Add object 'time there' to complete the idea.

× Yes, I think actually it's very important to see the park.

✓ Yes, I actually think it's very important to have parks.

'See the park' is odd; context asks about having more parks, so 'have parks' or 'have more parks' fits. Use plural 'parks' for general idea. Reorder 'actually' to sound natural.

× Uh, we will have the green area to have a good sightseeing and it will have many places for people to spend their spare time, such as reading or writing or drawing in the past.

✓ There should be green areas for good sightseeing, and they would have many places for people to spend their spare time, such as reading, writing, or drawing.

Original mixes tenses and articles. Use 'There should be' or 'There would be' to express preference. 'Green areas' plural is better. 'Sightseeing' does not need 'a' and is uncountable. Remove 'in the past' which conflicts with future desire. Use consistent conditional or future reference.

× Yes umm in my hometown it have a new facilities parked in the future it is constructing and I'm looking forward to go here with my dog and also have pet friendly area so I look.

✓ Yes. In my hometown there will be new park facilities; they are under construction, and I'm looking forward to going there with my dog because there will be a pet-friendly area.

Multiple problems: 'it have' should be 'there will be' or 'it has' for subject-verb agreement and correct subject. 'A new facilities' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'new park facilities' or 'a new facility'. 'Parked' is incorrect word choice; 'park facilities' or 'a new park' is intended. Use progressive 'are under construction' for ongoing building. Use 'looking forward to going' (gerund after 'looking forward to'). 'Go here' should be 'going there'. Add 'pet-friendly area' hyphenated and proper article. Break into clearer clauses.