Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答有内容但语法和表达不够自然，句子冗长且有语法错误（如时态、冠词和动词形式）。建议用一到两句直接回答并用1–2个具体细节支持，注意冠词（a/the）、时态一致和更自然的短语（e.g. “meet up with friends”, “play games”）。

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my grandparents, where I could meet up with friends and we would play games on the grass or climb the playground equipment.

Sugestão: 回答直接但表达混乱且语法错误较多（如动词形式、词序和多余词）。建议先用一句清楚的主题句，然后用一两句具体解释原因并用连接词如“because”或“so”。注意动词不定式和名词搭配（prefer shopping / buy things）。

Exemplo: Not really, I don't go to parks much anymore because I've recently developed a hobby for shopping. I prefer visiting shopping malls where I can do window shopping and buy things I need.

Sugestão: 回答观点明确但有重复（两个 also）且用词稍笨拙（adjust air quality）。建议用一到两句表达观点并给出具体理由，使用连接词如 “because” 或 “which” 来使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I would. Parks improve urban air quality and provide green spaces for people to relax, which would make the city more attractive and healthy.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体但表达不够流畅，存在语法和用词错误（sceneries, word order, unnecessary fillers like "I mean"). 建议先给出明确回答，然后用一两句描述为什么（如景色、活动），注意正确词序和名词用法（scenery is uncountable）。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Changbai Mountain Natural Park because I have never been there. I saw beautiful photos online and the scenery looks stunning, so I hope to hike and take photos there in the future.

× Of course, when I was a little girl, I usually went to park with my grandparents because I may meet up my friends in the parks and we would play it together.

✓ Of course, when I was a little girl, I usually went to the park with my grandparents because I might meet up with my friends in the park and we would play together.

错误主要在介词和短语搭配："went to park" 应为 "went to the park"（需要定冠词）；"may meet up my friends" 应为 "might meet up with my friends"（meet up 后需介词 with，且上下文为过去习惯用过去式或过去可能性，使用 might 更合适）；"in the parks" 改为统一的单数 "in the park" 更符合前文语境；"play it together" 中的代词 "it" 多余，改为 "play together"。建议：注意固定搭配（go to the park, meet up with someone），以及冠词和介词的使用。

× No I don't. I mean I change my hobby recently years because I prefer to shopping in shopping malls and I can do some window shopping and buy some items what I want that can.

✓ No, I don't. I mean I changed my hobby in recent years because I prefer shopping in malls; I can do some window shopping and buy items that I want.

错误涉及时态和动词形式：原句使用现在时 "I change" 与时间短语 "recently years" 不一致，应使用过去完成或过去式 "I changed" 或 "I have changed"（此处用过去式或完成时均可，选 past simple 更自然）；"prefer to shopping" 中 prefer 后接动词应为不带 to 的动名词形式 "prefer shopping" 或 "prefer to shop"；"shopping malls" 简化为 "malls"；"buy some items what I want that can" 结构混乱，改为定语从句 "buy items that I want"。建议：根据时间状语选择正确时态，掌握 prefer 的常见搭配（prefer + Ving 或 prefer to + V）。

× Of course, parks also can adjust our city air quality and also it can make the city nicer.

✓ Of course, parks can also improve our city's air quality and make the city nicer.

错误为介词和词语搭配问题："adjust our city air quality" 表达不自然，英文中通常用 "improve air quality"；"our city air quality" 改为所有格 "our city's air quality" 更自然；句中重复使用 "also" 冗余，合并为 "can also improve... and make..."。建议：学习常用搭配（improve air quality），注意所有格的使用和句内词语冗余精简。

× Yes, of course, I want to go to the Chang Bashan Natural Park because I haven't been there before. I just saw some beautiful pictures online. I mean the sceneries, they're pretty attractive me to go to there to visit.

✓ Yes, of course. I want to go to Changbai Mountain Natural Park because I haven't been there before. I just saw some beautiful pictures online. I mean, the scenery is pretty attractive and makes me want to go there to visit.

存在时态和结构问题："the sceneries" 用法不当，scenery 是不可数名词，应使用单数 "the scenery"；"they're pretty attractive me to go to there to visit" 结构混乱，缺少连接词和正确的主动/被动表达，改为 "the scenery is pretty attractive and makes me want to go there to visit" 更通顺；此外地名应统一为常见译名（Changbai Mountain）。建议：注意不可数名词的用法（scenery 不加复数），学习使役结构（make sb. do sth.）和固定表达 "want to go there"。