Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatically correct response with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific supporting details (what you did, who with, or a memory). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. Use a past tense consistently when talking about childhood.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to the park when I was a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, and we sometimes had picnics with my family. Those visits were my favorite part of weekends because they felt free and fun.

Sugestão: Avoid one-word answers and abrupt negatives. Start with a clear topic sentence and then explain with specific reasons or exceptions. Use linking words (however, although, because) to make the answer coherent and natural. Keep it polite and provide detail about habits or preferences.

Exemplo: Not as much as before. Although I enjoyed parks as a child, I rarely go now because I have a busy schedule and prefer exercising at home. However, I still visit parks occasionally when friends invite me or when I want a short walk.

Sugestão: Answer directly and expand with specific reasons or examples why more parks would be good. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and give 1–2 brief outcomes or benefits to make your response effective and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for families to relax. For example, a new park near my neighborhood would give children a place to play and encourage people to exercise outdoors.

Sugestão: Be specific about which park(s) you mean or describe the kind of park you want to visit. Use coherent sentences with clear tense and linking words to explain why and when you plan to go. Avoid vague phrasing and correct grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the botanical garden near the riverside next year because I remember dreaming about its flower displays as a child. I plan to go in spring when the flowers are in bloom and take photos with my family.

× Yes, I like going to the park when I was a child child and I also played there.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child, and I also played there.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with past time 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Also remove duplicated word 'child' and add a comma before coordinating conjunction 'and' connecting two independent clauses. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for habits in the past: 'I liked going...'.

× No, because I am very lazy.

✓ No, because I am very lazy now.

The response 'No' refers to the present time, and the original sentence 'I am very lazy' is grammatical, but adding 'now' clarifies the contrast with past liking of parks. If you prefer to keep it simple, 'No, I'm very lazy' is also acceptable. This is a clarification rather than a strict grammatical correction.

× Yeah, I often think of it.

✓ Yeah, I often think about it.

The phrasal verb 'think of' can be used, but 'think about' is more natural when considering desire or planning to have more parks. 'Think of it' can imply a fleeting idea. Use 'think about' for sustained consideration. This is a usage preference; grammatically both can be correct, but 'think about' fits the context better.

× I would like to go. And then they still have, because that's what I ever dream of when I was a child.

✓ I would like to go. I hope they will still exist, because that was what I used to dream of when I was a child.

Multiple problems: 'they still have' is ungrammatical here—use 'they will still exist' for referring to parks in the future (future tense). 'that's what I ever dream of when I was a child' mixes present perfect/ever with past time; use 'that was what I used to dream of when I was a child' to indicate past habitual dreaming. Also combine ideas into clear sentences. Suggestion: Use 'I hope' + future modal or 'will' to express expectation and 'used to' or past simple for past habits.