Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a brief reason or feeling. Avoid repetition and improve verb tense consistency (use past simple for past events).

Exemplo: Yes — I loved going to the park as a child. I used to go there once a week with my grandfather, and I especially remember feeding the ducks and playing on the swings because it felt peaceful and fun.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast past and present. Correct grammar and complete your final idea. Limit to two to three sentences and be specific about activities you do now.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy parks, but my reasons have changed. Whereas I went there as a child mainly to play, now I visit for exercise and family walks — for example, I jog around the lake and take my children there on weekends to relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear explanation with one specific example or consequence. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words like because or so to show reasoning. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Definitely — I would like to see more parks in my city because there are very few compared with larger cities. More parks would improve air quality and provide safe places for families to relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Give a specific example of a park or city and explain why you want to go there. Use complete sentences and a linking phrase for purpose. Avoid vague phrases like 'the big cities' without naming one.

Exemplo: Yes — I hope to visit Central Park in New York with my family because I want to see its famous lawns and lakes. I also plan to explore large urban parks to enjoy the greenery and take long family walks.

× Yes, I like going to the park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child.

The examiner asked about past preference as a child, so the student should use past tense 'liked' to match the time reference. Use past tense when describing habitual actions in the past (e.g., 'I liked going to the park when I was a child').

× When I was a child I was always going to the park with my grandfather.

✓ When I was a child, I always went to the park with my grandfather.

Use simple past 'went' for habitual past actions rather than past continuous 'was going'. The past continuous implies an action in progress at a specific time, while simple past describes repeated past habits. Add a comma after the time clause for clarity.

× Once a week.

✓ I went once a week.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Combine it with the previous sentence or make it a complete sentence with subject and past-tense verb: 'I went once a week.'

× Yes, but purpose is changed.

✓ Yes, but the purpose has changed.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to indicate a change from past to present, and include the definite article 'the' before 'purpose'. The original uses incorrect tense and omits the article.

× When I was a child I was going to the park for a fun, having fun and enjoy.

✓ When I was a child, I went to the park for fun, to have fun, and to enjoy myself.

Use simple past 'went' for habitual past actions and parallel infinitive forms for purposes: 'to have fun' and 'to enjoy myself.' The phrase 'for a fun' is incorrect; use 'for fun.' Add 'myself' after 'enjoy' when using the verb reflexively.

× Right now I'm going to the park for exercising, for my health, with my family and for.

✓ Right now I go to the park to exercise, for my health, and with my family.

Use present simple 'I go' for habitual present actions. Use the infinitive 'to exercise' rather than 'for exercising.' Remove the trailing 'and for' which is incomplete. Ensure parallel structure in the list.

× Definitely, but my CDs have very few parks compared to the big city, big other cities.

✓ Definitely, but my city has very few parks compared to big cities.

'CDs' seems to be a typo for 'city.' Use singular 'city' and plural 'cities' appropriately. Use 'big cities' to compare generally. Remove redundant 'big' and rearranged words for natural English.

× The parks are, uh, make a beautiful view in the country and.

✓ The parks make the countryside look beautiful.

The original is ungrammatical and incomplete. Use a clear subject-verb structure: 'The parks make the countryside look beautiful.' Remove filler 'uh' and the trailing 'and.' 'Countryside' is a natural noun for 'in the country.'

× Yes, I want to go to the. Big cities, parks with my family.

✓ Yes, I want to go to parks in big cities with my family.

The original is fragmented and has misplaced punctuation. Combine into one complete sentence with clear prepositional phrases: 'parks in big cities.' Place 'with my family' at the end to show who will accompany the speaker.

× My goal is visiting the bigger parks and look the green sky.

✓ My goal is to visit the bigger parks and to see the green trees and sky.

After 'goal is' use the infinitive 'to visit' rather than the -ing form 'visiting' for a more natural phrasing. Also use parallel infinitives: 'to visit' and 'to see.' 'Look the green sky' is ungrammatical; use 'see the green trees and sky' or 'see the greenery.'