Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (past tense) and organize short supporting details. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words like 'because' or 'when'. Also correct pronouns and verb forms (e.g., 'I liked going to parks when I was a child').

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because they were a fun place to play. When my school had a day off or when relatives visited, we often went to the park. I enjoyed playing on swings and having picnics with my family.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct present tense and plural/singular forms. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and be specific about who and what you do in parks. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks because I often take my two younger siblings there during school holidays. We usually play games, feed the ducks, and have snacks together, so it is a pleasant family activity.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly and give specific reasons. Use coherent linking (e.g., 'because', 'so') and correct vocabulary ('parks', 'small city', 'authorities', 'facilities'). Limit to a few well-formed sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it is small and currently has very few public green spaces. I hope the local authorities will invest in better park facilities so families have more places to relax and children can play safely.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and organized supporting details: location, features, and reason for visiting. Use correct tense and prepositions ('about 30 kilometers from Savar'). Avoid fillers and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Shahudin Park in the future. It is a historic park established in 1927 and is about 30 kilometers from my city, Savar. I want to see it because I have heard it is much more beautiful and has large gardens compared to parks at home.

× I actually the answer is yes.

✓ Actually, the answer is yes.

Extra word order 'I actually the answer is yes' mixes subject with noun phrase incorrectly. Remove the unnecessary subject 'I' and place 'actually' before 'the answer' to form a natural sentence: 'Actually, the answer is yes.'

× When I eat, when I are child I like going to park or when my school was a day off or or when my my relative circum to my home and I.

✓ When I was a child, I liked going to the park, for example when school was closed or when my relatives came to my home.

Multiple errors: tense (use past 'was' and 'liked' for childhood), subject-verb agreement ('are' should be 'was'), article use ('going to park' needs 'the park'), incorrect verbs ('circum' and word order). Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past habits, add articles before nouns, and use correct verb 'came'.

× Yes still I like going to parks now because I have a 2 little sister and brothers brothers us when their school is holiday, especially on holidays they they go to the bars and bring with me and and they like umm also enjoy with me in the park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because I have two little sisters and brothers who go with me when their school is on holiday. Especially during holidays they take me to the parks and enjoy being there with me.

Issues: number agreement and article/quantifier ('a 2 little sister and brothers' should be 'two little sisters and brothers'), incorrect pronoun and relative clause ('brothers us when' -> 'brothers who go with me'), preposition and word choice ('school is holiday' -> 'school is on holiday'), repetition and word order. Suggestions: use numerals as words in speech corrections, add relative pronoun 'who', use 'on holiday' and 'take me to the parks'.

× Yes, I like to see more parts in my city because us I really born a little city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I was born in a small town.

Errors: 'parts' should be 'parks' (word choice), tense and structure ('us I really born a little city' is ungrammatical). Use past passive 'was born' and correct noun 'town' or 'small city'. Suggestions: change to conditional 'would like' for preference and correct word forms.

× The name is cities Shabar.

✓ The name is Shabar City.

Word order and pluralization: 'cities Shabar' is incorrect. Use the correct order 'Shabar City' or 'the city is called Shabar'. Suggestions: place the proper noun before or after 'city' depending on naming convention and avoid pluralizing 'city'.

× Uh, uh, it's few who park in there.

✓ There are few parks there.

Use of 'it's few who park in there' is incorrect. Use existential 'There are' to indicate existence and plural 'parks'. Suggestion: use 'There are few parks there' or 'There are only a few parks there'.

× So I see in future, uh, the magistrate or the umm or the professional team aim improve park facility.

✓ So I think in the future the magistrate or a professional team will aim to improve park facilities.

Tense and verb form: use 'will' for future and 'aim to improve' (infinitive), plural 'facilities'. Suggestions: use 'I think' to introduce opinion, include 'will' for future intention and 'to' before verb.

× Uh, yes, uh, I in the future, I go to, uh, a park.

✓ Yes, in the future I will go to a park.

Use future tense for future plans: 'I go to' is present simple and unidiomatic for future. Use 'will' or 'am going to'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× This park name is, is Shahudin Park.

✓ This park's name is Shahudin Park.

Use possessive form or 'the name of this park is' rather than 'This park name is'. Suggestions: use 'This park's name is' for natural speech.

× This is established in 1927 and in Dhaka, it's for 30 kilometers to our Savar city.

✓ It was established in 1927 and is about 30 kilometers from our Savar city to Dhaka.

Tense and preposition: use past passive 'was established'. Distance expression requires 'about 30 kilometers from Savar to Dhaka' or 'is about 30 kilometers from Savar to Dhaka'. Suggestions: use 'from' to indicate distance between two places and 'was established' for founding date.

× And I know, oh, this park was very beautiful then my city's park.

✓ And I know this park is much more beautiful than my city's park.

Use comparison: 'then' is incorrect; should be 'than'. Tense consistency: if still beautiful use present 'is'. Use 'much more beautiful' or 'more beautiful than'. Suggestions: use 'than' for comparisons and keep tense consistent.