Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy, clarity and fluency. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), correct verb forms and word order, and keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Add one specific detail about memories to enrich your answer using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played football with my friends and used the playground equipment. Also, my family and I would have picnics every Sunday, which is one of my favorite childhood memories.

Sugestão: Make your response grammatically correct and coherent. Start with a direct answer, explain the reason using linking words (for example, because, but), avoid repeated hesitations, and be specific about when and why you stopped visiting parks.

Exemplo: Not really. Since I started university I see parks every day on my way to campus, but I rarely visit them because they are usually very crowded and noisy. However, I sometimes walk through a small garden near my dorm when I need a short break.

Sugestão: Respond directly and organize ideas with linking words. Correct countability and article use (a lot of parks, a special park for children and one for plants), and give a reason why more parks would be useful. Keep answers natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. My city has several parks already, including a children's park and a botanical garden, but I think more small parks would benefit residents because they provide places to relax and exercise. I would especially welcome parks in busy neighborhoods that lack green space.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and hesitations; give a concise, confident answer with a reason and one specific detail about what you would like to do there. Use correct tense for future intentions (would like to / want to / plan to).

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York. It is famous worldwide, and I want to walk along the lake and rent a boat, as well as see the Conservatory Garden when I visit.

× Sure, as a child I'll going to park to play uh, football or just playing uh playground and uh, picnic with my family.

✓ Sure. As a child I would go to the park to play football, use the playground, and have picnics with my family.

Original uses 'I'll going' and inconsistent verb forms. 'Will' + '-ing' is incorrect; use past habitual 'would go' or 'used to go'. Also 'playing playground' is wrong; use 'use the playground' or 'play on the playground'. Include articles: 'the park' and 'the playground'. Suggestion: use 'would' or 'used to' for past habitual actions and maintain parallel verb forms. -- Grammar problem type ID:8

× Actually, since I, uh, in university, uh, every day, uh, see park, but I don't uh, visit again because, uh, it's too crowded, too good to park.

✓ Actually, since I started university, I see the park every day, but I don't visit it often because it's too crowded and not a good place to relax.

Original mixes time references and verb tenses. 'Since I in university' requires 'since I started university' or 'since being at university'. 'See park' is incorrect; use 'see the park' or 'pass the park' and 'visit again' should be 'visit it often' or 'visit it anymore'. 'Too good to park' is unclear; likely intended 'not a good place to relax'. Suggestion: use present perfect or present simple appropriately after 'since' and include articles and objects. -- Grammar problem type ID:6

× Sure. Should. I have a lot of park around the city. We have a special park for children and then for flora, and I like to explore another park in my city.

✓ Sure. We have a lot of parks around the city. We have special parks for children and for plants, and I like to explore different parks in my city.

'Should. I have' is incorrect modal use; 'should' is unnecessary. 'A lot of park' needs plural 'parks'. 'For flora' is awkward; use 'for plants' or 'botanical'/'flower' gardens. 'Another park' implies one more; use 'different parks' to match context. Suggestion: remove inappropriate 'should', use plural nouns when talking about many, and choose correct nouns or adjectives for parks. -- Grammar problem type ID:4

× Sure. I I think I'm going to Central Park in New York because it's a very popular park in the world, I think.

✓ Sure. I think I'm going to Central Park in New York because it's a very popular park in the world.

Duplicate 'I I' is a filler/repetition. 'I'm going to Central Park' is fine for future plans but repeating 'I think' twice is redundant. Keep 'I think' once. Suggestion: remove filler words and avoid unnecessary repetition. -- Grammar problem type ID:6

× And then if I visit New York in the future, I think I will go to the Central Park.

✓ If I visit New York in the future, I will go to Central Park.

Article use: 'the Central Park' is incorrect; landmark names like 'Central Park' do not need 'the'. 'I think I will' is wordy; use 'I will' after conditional 'if I visit'. Tense is fine as future; simplify for clarity. Suggestion: drop unnecessary articles and reduce redundancy. -- Grammar problem type ID:7