Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and use correct tense and articles. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Reduce repetition and avoid filler words (uh). Use past simple for childhood and correct noun forms (a park, picnics, memories).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. My grandfather often took me to a nearby park, where we had picnics and played games. Those visits created happy memories, so I always looked forward to them.

Sugestão: Use present simple to state current preference and explain frequency clearly. Use correct verbs and pluralization (going to parks, not going regularly to parks). Keep it concise and add a linking word to connect reason (but, because).

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I don't visit them regularly because my schedule is very hectic these days.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion then support it with a clear, relevant reason. Use appropriate vocabulary (promote a greener environment, help protect the ozone layer/environment). Avoid repetition and filler words. One or two specific benefits are enough.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they promote a greener, healthier environment and help reduce air pollution.

Sugestão: Answer directly with the park name and one or two specific reasons using clear, natural phrases. Use present perfect or present simple for information you have heard (I've heard that...). Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Gandhinagar Park in the future. I have heard that it is very large and full of greenery, which makes it ideal for relaxing and taking long walks.

× Yes, I would love to going park.

✓ Yes, I would love to go to parks.

The modal phrase 'would love to' must be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Also 'park' needs the preposition 'to' and plural 'parks' fits general statement. Suggestion: use 'would love to' + base verb ('go') and include 'to' before the place ('to parks').

× In my childhood my grandfather often took me in park.

✓ In my childhood my grandfather often took me to the park.

The correct preposition with 'take' for movement toward a place is 'to', not 'in'. Also 'the park' is appropriate when referring to a specific or habitual place. Suggestion: use 'take someone to a place'.

× Uh, I have a very picnics on in parks.

✓ I had many picnics in parks.

'Very picnics' is ungrammatical; use a quantifier like 'many' with countable noun 'picnics'. Also past tense 'had' matches 'In my childhood'. Preposition 'in' is correct before 'parks'. Suggestion: use 'many picnics' and match tense to context.

× I have done I have very picnic in park.

✓ I have had many picnics in the park.

The original is fragmented and repeats. Use present perfect 'have had' if speaking of life experience or past simple 'had' for childhood. Use 'many picnics' and include article 'the' before 'park'. Suggestion: choose correct tense and a proper quantifier.

× I'm very memories.

✓ I have very fond memories.

'I'm very memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is a noun; use 'have memories' or adjective 'fond' to describe them. 'Very' modifies adjectives, so 'very fond memories' is correct. Suggestion: use 'have fond memories' or 'I remember very well'.

× That's why I would like to go to park.

✓ That's why I would like to go to the park.

When referring to a specific park or parks in general in this context, use the definite article 'the' and include preposition 'to' before 'the park'. Suggestion: 'go to the park' or 'go to parks'.

× Well yes I would like to going parks nowadays also, but I am not going regularly parks nowadays because of some hectic hectic schedule.

✓ Well, yes, I like going to parks nowadays, but I do not go to parks regularly because of a hectic schedule.

'Would like to going' is incorrect; use 'like going' or 'would like to go'. 'Going regularly parks' needs preposition 'to' ('go to parks regularly'). Repetition 'hectic hectic' is error; use 'a hectic schedule'. Suggestion: choose 'like going' for habitual action and use 'go to parks regularly'.

× Well yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Well, yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

Original is acceptable but missing commas for clarity. No grammar error per list; minor punctuation added. Suggestion: include commas after introductory 'Well' and 'yes' for spoken clarity.

× Umm because parks parks prefer present eco friendly environment uh to to prevent ozone layer.

✓ Because parks help create a more eco-friendly environment and help prevent damage to the ozone layer.

The original is ungrammatical and repetitive. 'Parks prefer present eco friendly environment' makes no sense. Use verbs like 'help create' or 'contribute to' and compound purpose 'help prevent damage to the ozone layer'. Also 'eco-friendly' needs a hyphen and 'the ozone layer' requires 'the'. Suggestion: simplify and use clear verbs for function of parks.

× Yes, definitely there is a, one park which I would like to go in in my future.

✓ Yes, definitely there is one park that I would like to visit in the future.

Redundant 'a, one' should be 'one' or 'a'. Use 'that' or 'which' with correct clause order. Use 'visit' rather than 'go in'. 'In my future' should be 'in the future'. Suggestion: use 'there is one park that I would like to visit in the future.'

× Uh, that park's name, Gandhi's Gandhinagar Park, uh, because I have heard very news in news is also that, that their park is very big park and uh, and present greenery all over there.

✓ That park's name is Gandhinagar Park because I have heard in the news that the park is very large and has greenery all over.

Original has incorrect word order and redundant words. Use 'That park's name is...' or 'The park is called...'. 'Heard very news in news is also that' is ungrammatical; use 'heard in the news that'. 'Their park' should be 'the park'. Avoid repeating 'park'. Suggestion: use concise structure: 'I heard in the news that the park is very large and has greenery everywhere.'

× And that's why I would like to go in that park in future.

✓ And that's why I would like to go to that park in the future.

Use preposition 'to' with 'go' for movement toward a place, not 'in'. Include 'the' before 'future' and 'that park' needs 'to'. Suggestion: use 'go to that park in the future.'