Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak in complete, grammatically correct sentences and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and include a linking word to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. For example, I often played tag and swung on the swings with neighbourhood friends, which made the park feel lively and fun.

Sugestão: Use present tense for current habits and correct word forms. Give a clear reason and one specific example of what you do there. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax when I am stressed. For instance, I often take a short walk in the park after work to clear my mind and listen to birds.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repeating phrases. State your opinion directly, then give a specific reason or consequence. Use correct grammar for conditional/ hypothetical expressions.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many children lack a nearby green space. As a result, building more small neighbourhood parks would give them safe places to play and socialise.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear topic sentence about a specific park and why you want to visit. Use future tense correctly and provide descriptive detail linked with a reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the new botanical park near my home in the future because it has many flower beds and quiet paths, which would be perfect for photography and relaxing walks.

× Yes, I mostly like to going park when I was child because there are many children are playing on the ground in the park.

✓ Yes, I mostly liked going to the park when I was a child because many children were playing on the ground in the park.

Tense and verb form errors: the speaker refers to a past habit so use past tense 'liked' and 'was a child'. 'Like to going' is incorrect; use the gerund 'going' after 'liked' or 'like'. Also include the article 'the' before 'park' and 'a' before 'child'. Remove the extra 'are' before 'playing' and use past continuous 'were playing' to match past context. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past habits (e.g., 'I liked going to the park when I was a child; many children were playing there').

× So I walk and like to go in park or playing games etc activities when I was child.

✓ So I walked and liked to go to the park or play games and do other activities when I was a child.

Multiple sentence structure and verb form issues: 'I walk' should be past 'I walked' to match past context. 'Like to go in park' should be 'liked to go to the park'. 'or playing games etc activities' mixes forms; use parallel infinitive or base form 'play games and do other activities'. Add article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: Keep verbs parallel and consistent in tense (e.g., 'I walked, liked to go to the park, and played games').

× Yes till I like to going park now because when I was tired I when I was feel tired and upset.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park now because when I feel tired and upset, I go there.

Tense and word choice errors: 'till' is incorrect here; use 'still' for continued preference. 'like to going' should be 'like going' (verb + -ing). Redundant 'when I was tired I when I was feel tired' must be simplified and matched to present: 'when I feel tired and upset'. Also add 'the' before 'park' and use a complete clause 'I go there'. Suggestion: Use present simple for current habits (e.g., 'I still like going to the park because when I feel tired or upset, I go there to relax').

× So I want to go Park School fresh my mind.

✓ So I want to go to the park to refresh my mind.

Incorrect word order and missing prepositions/articles: 'go Park School' is nonsensical; likely intended 'go to the park' and 'refresh' is the verb needed. Add 'to' before the infinitive 'refresh' and use 'the park'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and infinitive forms (e.g., 'go to the park to refresh my mind').

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many of the children are not going to park because there was no near park in their home.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many children do not go to parks; there is no park near their homes.

Mixed tense and article/preposition errors: 'are not going to park' should be simple present 'do not go to parks' to express general truth. 'was no near park in their home' uses wrong tense and word order; use 'there is no park near their homes'. Also remove 'the' before 'children' and pluralize 'home' to 'homes'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual facts and correct word order: 'many children do not go to parks because there is no park near their homes'.

× So I think I will I would like to more parks in my city.

✓ So I think I would like more parks in my city.

Redundant modal verbs and incorrect word order: 'I will I would like' is redundant; choose one ('would like' fits polite preference). 'like to more parks' is incorrect—use 'like more parks' or 'like to have more parks'. Suggestion: Use a single modal and correct object placement (e.g., 'I would like more parks in my city' or 'I would like to have more parks in my city').

× Yes, I want to go park in my future.

✓ Yes, I want to go to parks in the future.

Preposition and noun form: 'go park' needs 'to' and plural 'parks' or 'the park' depending on meaning. 'in my future' is unnatural; use 'in the future'. Suggestion: Use 'in the future' for future time and include proper prepositions: 'I want to go to parks in the future' or 'I want to visit a park in the future'.

× The park is near my home there.

✓ There is a park near my home.

Awkward word order and article use: 'The park is near my home there' is odd; better to state existence with 'There is a park near my home.' Use 'a' since the park hasn't been previously identified. Suggestion: Use natural English word order: 'There is a park near my home' or 'The park near my home is close by'.

× There is a full of flowers there.

✓ It is full of flowers there.

Incorrect structure: 'There is a full of flowers' is ungrammatical. Use 'It is full of flowers' to describe the park, or 'The park is full of flowers.' Suggestion: Use correct subject and adjective phrase: 'The park is full of flowers' or 'It is full of flowers there'.