Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details, avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") correctly and keep the response within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were one of the few places where I could meet other children. For example, I often played on the swings and joined impromptu games, which helped me make friends despite being introverted.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct answer, then give two concise reasons linked with connectors like "because" or "however". Correct grammar (e.g., "I rarely have the chance") and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: Yes, I still like parks, but I rarely visit them now because there are no parks near my home and I have little free time due to work.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then provide a clear, specific reason. Avoid unclear statements; correct vocabulary and sentence structure (e.g., "increase property values"). Keep it to two sentences maximum and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks near my home because they improve the quality of life. Also, new construction plans often include green spaces, which can increase property values and attract families.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer first, then describe specific features you would like using clear vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words (e.g., "but", "for example") properly and avoid unnecessary fillers like "uh".

Exemplo: I don't have a particular park in mind, but I would like to visit parks that host seasonal events and have playgrounds and food stalls. For example, a park with weekend markets and live performances would be ideal for spending a full afternoon.

× 'Uh, cause I'm kinda introvert so during my childhood I believe that it's was, it was a good place to be friend with other children.'

✓ 'Uh, because I'm kind of an introvert, so during my childhood I believe that it was a good place to make friends with other children.'

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