Parks— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Candidato
Yeah, I like going to park with my cousin because I happy they are happy.
Examinador
Do you still like going to parks now?
Candidato
Yeah, you know, in here in my place, it's near to my park, you know, like my park is name Sanjay at Bill because they are people because they are people like buy food something with stranger running from.
Examinador
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Candidato
I don't like to visit more park in my Kitty because if I'm appreciated in new park in my Kitty, I have a long time from a doctor for my park.
Examinador
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Candidato
Yeah, I going to my park in heaven.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: Jawaban Anda singkat dan tata bahasanya tidak tepat. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dengan memberikan topic sentence yang jelas, alasan yang spesifik, dan hubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung sederhana (mis. because, and). Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan bentuk tense yang benar (past tense: liked).
Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because I often went with my cousin and we enjoyed playing on the swings together. We also had picnics, which made those afternoons very fun.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Pontuação: 22.0Sugestão: Jawaban tidak jelas dan berulang, dengan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa dan kosa kata yang tidak tepat. Buat satu kalimat topik yang menjawab langsung (Yes/No) lalu tambahkan 1-2 kalimat dukungan yang spesifik (lokasi, kegiatan, suasana). Gunakan kosakata yang relevan (e.g. nearby, vendors, joggers).
Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because there is a park near my home called Sanjay Park. It is lively with food vendors and people jogging, so I like the friendly atmosphere.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: Jawaban tidak menjawab pertanyaan dengan jelas dan terdapat kalimat yang tidak masuk akal. Jawab langsung (Yes/No/Maybe) lalu jelaskan alasan konkret (mis. kebutuhan ruang hijau, kemudahan akses). Gunakan struktur logis dan hindari frasa yang tidak relevan.
Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green spaces for exercise and relaxation, and more parks would make them easier to access for many neighborhoods.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan metaforis sehingga tidak jelas. Jawab dengan menyebutkan taman konkret atau jenis taman yang ingin dikunjungi dan jelaskan alasannya. Gunakan future tense yang benar (I would like to / I want to).
Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit some famous parks in the future, such as national parks or botanical gardens, because I enjoy nature and would love to see diverse plants and landscapes.
Gramática
× 'Yeah, I like going to park with my cousin because I happy they are happy.'
✓ 'Yeah, I liked going to the park with my cousin because I was happy when they were happy.'
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