Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms (e.g., 'liked', 'go out', 'play'), correct noun phrases ('children's park'), and make a concise topic sentence followed by one supporting detail. Keep within 2–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often felt lonely at home, so I would go to the children's park to play with friends, which made me happy for the whole day.

Sugestão: Correct verb patterns and link ideas: use 'I don't like going' and 'I prefer staying at home and watching TV.' Use linking words like 'because' appropriately and add a brief reason for preference. Keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: No, I don't like going to parks now because they are usually crowded and noisy. For this reason, I prefer staying at home and watching TV where it's quieter.

Sugestão: Be specific and accurate with vocabulary and grammar: say 'reduce greenhouse gases' or 'improve greenery/air quality' and match verbs and subjects ('they can give dogs a place'). Use a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific benefits.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city. More parks would improve air quality and provide safe places for dogs and families to exercise and relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a short, coherent reason. Fix grammar ('I don't like parks', 'they do not interest me') and avoid repetition. If possible, mention an alternative activity you prefer in the future to make the answer more informative.

Exemplo: No, I don't plan to visit parks much in the future because I prefer living alone and enjoying quiet activities. Instead, I expect to spend my free time reading at home or going for solitary walks.

× Yes, of course when I was a child I always felt lonely so I'd like to went out and playing with my friends in children hard. It can make me feel happy all day.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I always felt lonely so I'd like to go out and play with my friends in the children's yard. It would make me feel happy all day.

Errors: 'went' is past tense while after 'I'd like to' we need the base form 'go' (verb in base form after would like); 'playing' should be 'play' to match parallel structure; 'children hard' is incorrect word choice and form — likely 'children's yard' or 'playground'; 'It can make me feel' should be 'It would make me feel' to match the conditional 'I'd like'. Suggestion: use base verbs after 'would like' (would like + to + base verb), keep parallel verb forms, use correct noun forms for places (children's yard/playground), and match modal tense for consistency.

× No, I really don't like to go to the park now because I think there are too many children in there and it is very noisy, so I like to stay at home and watching TV.

✓ No, I really don't like to go to the park now because I think there are too many children there and it is very noisy, so I like to stay at home and watch TV.

Errors: 'in there' is redundant; 'watching' is a gerund but should be the base verb 'watch' after 'like to' (use 'like to watch' or 'like watching' consistently). Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions, and after 'like to' use base verb form or change structure to 'I like watching TV'.

× Yes, of course it would be better that there are more parks built in the city because it can reduce the greenhouse and gives the dogs a place to play and enjoy themselves.

✓ Yes, of course it would be better if more parks were built in the city because they can reduce greenhouse gases and give dogs a place to play and enjoy themselves.

Errors: 'that there are more parks built' is awkward; use conditional 'if more parks were built' or 'if the city built more parks'; 'reduce the greenhouse' is incorrect collocation — should be 'reduce greenhouse gases' or 'help with the greenhouse effect'; subject-verb agreement: 'gives the dogs' should be 'give dogs' to agree with plural subject 'parks'; pronoun 'the dogs' can be simplified to 'dogs'. Suggestion: use conditional structure for hypothetical improvements, correct collocations for environmental terms, and ensure verb agreement with plural subjects.

× No, I really don't like to go to parks now. I'd like to live alone and enjoy myself so it so parks cannot interest me now.

✓ No, I really don't like going to parks now. I'd like to live alone and enjoy myself, so parks do not interest me now.

Errors: 'don't like to go to parks now' is acceptable but 'don't like going to parks' is more natural in this context; 'so it so parks cannot interest me now' contains extra words 'it so' and uses 'cannot interest me' which is unnatural — use 'do not interest me' or 'do not appeal to me'; tense and agreement: use present simple 'do not interest'. Suggestion: remove redundant words, choose natural verb phrases ('do not interest me' or 'do not appeal to me'), and maintain consistent present tense.