Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct pronunciation/word choice (parks not perks), and avoid run-on sentences. Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (for example, because/so). Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t. I was very shy as a child, so I preferred staying at home and praying with my family rather than playing in busy parks.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and a specific reason with correct grammar (e.g., "an English exam"). Use a linking word (because/so) and limit to 2–3 sentences. You can mention one brief example of responsibilities.

Exemplo: Not really, because I am a high school student with a heavy workload. For example, I often need to spend my free time doing homework and preparing for an English exam.

Sugestão: Respond directly and give a specific reason with correct grammar and word choice (families, parks). Use a linking word and include a short suggestion or example of benefit to make the answer richer.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. My city has many families but few parks, so children often have nowhere safe to play; more parks would give them places for exercise and socialising.

Sugestão: Avoid filler phrases and be decisive. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice (parks), and give a brief reason or alternative (e.g., types of parks you might like). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: I’m not sure, because I haven’t visited many parks nearby. However, if I had the chance I'd like to visit a botanical garden or a quiet park where I can relax and study.

× No, I didn't because when I was a child I was very shy and there were a lot of children so I didn't really want to go to perks, so I preferred to stay home and pray with my family.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a child I was very shy and there were a lot of children so I didn't really want to go to parks, so I preferred to stay home and play with my family.

The word 'perks' is a misspelling of 'parks' (countable plural). Also 'pray' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'play'. Correct plural 'parks' fits meaning. Suggestion: spell 'parks' correctly and use 'play' when referring to recreational activities with family.

× No, I don't, because now I'm a high school student and then there are a lot of things that I have to do, like doing homework, taking a English exam.

✓ No, I don't, because now I'm a high school student and there are a lot of things that I have to do, like doing homework and taking an English exam.

The original mixes tenses and uses 'then' incorrectly. Use present continuous/status 'I'm a high school student' and present simple 'there are'. Also change 'taking a English exam' to 'taking an English exam' (article usage: 'an' before vowel sound). Remove 'then' which is unnecessary. Use 'and' to list activities.

× Yes, I would because there are a lot of family in my city but there are not many perks so kids cannot go to parks.

✓ Yes, I would because there are a lot of families in my city but there are not many parks so kids cannot go to parks.

'Family' as a countable noun referring to groups should be plural 'families'. 'Perks' is misspelling of 'parks'. Ensure consistent plural forms: 'parks'. Consider rephrasing second clause to avoid repetition: 'but there are not many parks for children to visit.'

× Umm, that's an interesting question. Actually I'm I don't really know about the parks. So I feel like perks are for kids. So I think there's not perks that I want to go.

✓ Umm, that's an interesting question. Actually, I don't really know much about the parks. I feel like parks are for kids, so I don't think there are any parks I would want to go to.

Multiple issues: remove extra 'I'm'. Use 'know much about' instead of 'know about' for clarity. Replace 'perks' with 'parks'. 'There's not perks' is ungrammatical: use plural 'there are not any parks' or 'I don't think there are any parks I would want to go to.' Suggest using 'I don't think there are any parks I would want to visit.'