Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần đúng thì, tránh lặp từ và dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán, trình bày tối đa 3-4 câu, thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động, cảm xúc) và nối ý bằng từ liên kết như “and” hoặc “so”.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. I visited it almost every day to play with my friends, and we usually swung on the swings and ran around the garden. Those visits made me feel carefree and happy.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần ngữ pháp chính xác (thì và chia động từ), tránh câu dài lủng củng; nên nêu quan điểm rõ ràng rồi giải thích ngắn gọn bằng lý do cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như “but” hoặc “because” đúng vị trí và thêm ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động hiện tại (ví dụ: walking, exercising).

Exemplo: Yes, I still go to parks, but I don't enjoy them as much as before because I mostly use them for a short walk or light exercise. I rarely play on the equipment now, so the visits feel more routine than fun.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng (ví dụ: “I would like…”). Tránh sai số ít/ nhiều (park/parks) và diễn đạt cụ thể lý do, kèm đề xuất ngắn gọn. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (green spaces, crowded).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are many roads and supermarkets, which leaves little space for green areas. More parks would improve residents' quality of life and provide places for relaxation.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp; nên trả lời trực tiếp hiện tại hoặc tương lai, nêu tên hoặc vị trí công viên và lý do muốn đến (ví dụ: mới xây, có tiện ích). Sắp xếp câu đúng trật tự và dùng thì tương lai đơn khi nói dự định (“I will visit”, “I'll go”).

Exemplo: There is a new park being built near my home that I want to visit once construction is finished. I’m looking forward to trying its playground and walking paths when it opens.

× Yes, I love going to the park as a child because when I was a child I went to the park every day to play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park as a child because when I was a child I went to the park every day to play with my friends.

The student uses present tense 'love' and 'going' to describe past habitual actions. The context 'as a child' requires past tense. Change 'love' to 'loved' to match past time reference. Also keep 'going' as 'going' is acceptable after 'loved', but overall past simple is clearer. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when describing past habits (e.g., 'I loved going to the park').

× We always played in the swing and running around the garden.

✓ We always played on the swings and ran around the garden.

Use 'on the swings' not 'in the swing' because people use swings by sitting on them; use plural 'swings' for general habit. 'Running' is a participle; the coordinate verb should match 'played', so use past simple 'ran'. Suggestion: match verb forms and use correct preposition and plural where appropriate.

× Yes I still going to the park but I don't really like to go now because I actually go to the park to just walk and I barely running or playing around like a child anymore.

✓ Yes, I still go to the park, but I don't really like to go now because I actually go to the park just to walk and I hardly run or play around like a child anymore.

'Still going' is missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous, but the intended meaning is habitual present so use simple present 'still go'. 'Barely running' mixes forms; use 'hardly run' or 'barely run' in simple present. 'Just to walk' word order is corrected. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and ensure verbs agree in form (go, run, play).

× Guess I would love to see more park in my city because in my city there are so many roads, so many supermarkets that barely have place for parks or greens Bay.

✓ I guess I would love to see more parks in my city because there are so many roads and supermarkets that barely have space for parks or green bays.

Use plural 'parks' when speaking generally. 'Have place' should be 'have space'. 'Greens Bay' is unclear; likely 'green bays' or 'green spaces'—here 'green bays' retained but 'green bays' as plural. Also add 'I' at start and fix conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general references and use 'space' for availability.

× Yesterday you come near my home, Daddy under construction. To visiting once it finished construction.

✓ Yesterday, something came near my home; the road was under construction. I will visit once it is finished.

The original sentences are fragmented and mix tenses and subjects. 'You come near my home' is unclear; changed to 'something came near my home' or specify subject. 'Daddy under construction' is ungrammatical; interpreted as 'the road was under construction'. 'To visiting once it finished construction' lacks proper verb forms and tense; use 'I will visit once it is finished' or 'I will visit once construction is finished'. Suggestion: write complete sentences with clear subjects and correct tense agreement for future plans ('will visit' or 'visit once it is finished').