Part 1
Examinador
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Candidato
Yes, I do. I like. Going to park as a child so we I practice, uh, Dojo with my mother.
Examinador
Do you still like going to parks now?
Candidato
No I don't umm, there are aunt the park in my area so I don't go to a park.
Examinador
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Candidato
Yes I do. The parks are needed for child, other and older people and people who have dogs and cats so.
Examinador
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Candidato
Hmm, I can thinking of think of anything but. So the podcast useful park for child and, uh, elder people.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答を明確で文法的に正しい現在/過去の時制でまとめ、余分な「あー」「えー」を減らす練習をしてください。具体的には、トピック文(Yes/No + 簡潔な理由)を作り、その後に1~2文で詳細(誰と、どんな活動をしたか、どんな感情を持ったか)を付け加えると自然です。語順や冠詞(a/the)に注意し、動詞の形を一貫させてください。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I used to go to the park with my mother to practice at a dojo located there. We attended martial arts classes every weekend, which I enjoyed because I liked exercising and spending time with her.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 否定する場合でも理由をはっきり述べ、文法と語順を整える練習をしてください。特に「there are no parks in my area」のような表現や「so」を使って結論を導く構造を正確に使うことが重要です。あいまいな語(aunt?)や余分な中断を避ける練習も効果的です。
Exemplo: No, I don't go to parks often now because there are no parks near my home. As a result, I rarely visit parks unless I travel to another neighbourhood.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 賛成の意見を述べるときは、理由を論理的に整理して具体例を入れてください。例えば、どのような設備(遊具、ベンチ、散歩道)が必要か、誰にとって役立つかを明確に述べ、接続詞(for example, because, such as)でつなげると効果的です。複数形や冠詞(children, elderly people)を正しく使ってください。
Exemplo: Yes, I would. More parks are needed in the city because they provide playgrounds for children, walking paths for elderly people, and open spaces for pet owners. For example, a park with benches and shaded play areas would benefit families and senior citizens.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: 質問に直接答え、明確な計画や希望を示す練習をしてください。答えが思い浮かばない場合は一般的な希望(a large park, a park with playgrounds)を述べ、その理由を一文で述べると良いです。また不要な中断を減らし、語彙(useful? better: suitable, child-friendly)を正確に使う訓練をしましょう。
Exemplo: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I would like to visit a large, child-friendly park in the future. Ideally, it would have modern playgrounds and quiet paths for older visitors, making it suitable for families and elderly people.
× Yes, I do. I like. Going to park as a child so we I practice, uh, Dojo with my mother.
✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to parks as a child because I practiced at a dojo with my mother.
The student is talking about past habits, so present tense 'do' and 'like' are incorrect; use past tense 'did' and 'liked'. Also use plural 'parks' (general meaning) and correct word order and punctuation. Suggestion: Use simple past for past routines and keep clauses in natural order: 'I liked going to parks as a child because I practiced at a dojo with my mother.'
× No I don't umm, there are aunt the park in my area so I don't go to a park.
✓ No, I don't. There aren't any parks in my area, so I don't go to parks.
Use 'there aren't any' for negative existence and plural 'parks' for general reference. 'Aunt' was a mispronunciation; replace with 'any'. Also keep consistent plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use 'There aren't any parks in my area' for negation of existence and match plural form.
× Yes I do. The parks are needed for child, other and older people and people who have dogs and cats so.
✓ Yes, I do. Parks are needed for children, other people, elderly people, and those who have dogs and cats.
'Are needed' is grammatical but list items require correct plural nouns and clearer categories. 'Child' should be 'children'; 'older people' is better as 'elderly people' or 'older people'; 'people who have dogs and cats' can be 'those who have dogs or cats'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and clearer group labels: 'Parks are needed for children, elderly people, and pet owners.'
× Hmm, I can thinking of think of anything but. So the podcast useful park for child and, uh, elder people.
✓ Hmm, I can't think of anything. But parks are useful for children and elderly people.
Mix of modal and verb forms: 'can thinking of think' is incorrect; use 'can't think' to express inability. 'Podcast' is likely misused; context indicates 'parks'. Use plural 'parks' and plural 'children' and 'elderly people'. Suggestion: Use the negative modal 'can't' plus base verb 'think' and ensure correct nouns: 'I can't think of anything. Parks are useful for children and elderly people.'