Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорите в прошедшем времени последовательно и избегайте сокращений/ошибок в согласовании. Начните с четкого топик‑предложения, затем добавьте одно или два поддерживающих предложения с конкретными деталями. Уберите паузы и повторения.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, which made those visits memorable.

Sugestão: Устраните междометия и используйте правильные времена и формы глаголов. Дайте ясный общий ответ, затем коротко поясните причину и добавьте конкретный пример. Старайтесь не превышать 3–4 предложений.

Exemplo: Not really, I don't enjoy most parks in my city because they are noisy and poorly maintained. However, I do visit one small park near my home every day because it is quiet and has good walking paths.

Sugestão: Избавьтесь от слов-паразитов и стройте логическую структуру: утверждение + причина + пример/следствие. Используйте более точную лексику (e.g., "green spaces", "recreational areas") и избегайте повторов в конце.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are few green spaces at the moment. More parks would give people places to exercise and meet friends, improving community life.

Sugestão: Дайте более развёрнутый и конкретный ответ: назовите парк или опишите, что делает его особенным, и объясните, почему вы хотите туда пойти. Избегайте общих фраз и междометий.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the new Riverside Park because it is very large and has lakes and cycling trails. I want to go there to relax and try the bike paths with friends.

× When I was a child I like going to parks, but now I don't do it.

✓ When I was a child I liked going to parks, but now I don't.

The speaker refers to a past habit ('when I was a child') so the verb should be in the past tense ('liked'). Also 'do it' is vague; 'don't' suffices when context is clear. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and keep the second clause concise.

× To be honest, I don't like uh, parks, umm, in my city, but uh, there is uh, one park, umm, where I, uh, where I going every day.

✓ To be honest, I don't like parks in my city, but there is one park where I go every day.

The phrase 'where I going' is missing the auxiliary or correct form. For simple present habitual actions use 'I go', not 'I going'. Also remove filler words and redundant commas. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yeah, I uh, really would like uh, to see more parks in my city because, umm, my city, uh, has not uh, many parks, uh, and beautiful parks, uh, but I would like to uh, walk in uh, with my uh, friends. I would like.

✓ Yes, I really would like to see more parks in my city because my city does not have many beautiful parks, and I would like to walk in them with my friends.

Incorrect phrasing 'has not many parks' should be 'does not have many parks'. Also article use and word order: 'many beautiful parks' rather than 'and beautiful parks'. 'Walk in with my friends' requires an object for 'walk in' — use 'walk in them' or 'walk there'. Suggestion: use 'does not have' for negation with 'have' and place adjectives before nouns; include pronoun to refer back to 'parks'.

× Yes, there is uh, one, uh, park, uh. I want to visit in the future because it is really huge, for example.

✓ Yes, there is one park I want to visit in the future because it is really huge, for example.

Sentence had unnecessary pauses and punctuation. The tense is correct (present 'there is' and present for general fact 'it is huge') but the clause should be streamlined: 'one park I want to visit' rather than disjointed fragments. Suggestion: remove fillers and join clauses for clarity.