Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and use correct tense and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child.), then give 1–2 specific supporting details (what you did, how it made you feel) using linking words. Avoid repetition and long unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I often played in the playground and walked along peaceful paths, which made me feel refreshed. Because the parks were quiet and green, they were my favorite places to relax and play.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use correct adverbs and verb forms, and connect ideas with linking words. Begin with a clear statement about current habit, then explain the reason and add a realistic comment about future frequency.

Exemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks, but I visit them only occasionally because I am very busy with work and study. If I had more free time, I would go more often, perhaps even every day to relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning and use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'parks' not 'pet' or 'part'). Give a reasoned opinion with specific benefits and use linking words (for example, because, therefore).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide peaceful places to relax. For example, more parks would give families and children safe areas to play and adults space for exercise, so overall the city would become healthier.

Sugestão: Use correct names and vocabulary (Disneyland), and be clear about what you mean (theme park vs. park). Start with a direct answer and give specific reasons and examples. Keep sentences short and accurate.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Disneyland in the future because I have never been there. I have only seen it in movies and I want to experience the rides and shows in person, especially the fairy-tale attractions like Cinderella's castle.

× Yes, I like to go to the past when I was church because it's made me so fresh be the pathway is so peaceful and there's some days has some playground playground. That's why I really like the park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child because it made me feel refreshed; the paths were peaceful and some days there were playgrounds. That's why I really liked the park.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: the student is referring to past habits, so present tense 'like' should be past 'liked' and 'to go to the past when I was church' is incorrect phrasing and noun choice. 'Church' seems wrong; context indicates 'park' or 'childhood' so corrected to 'when I was a child' and 'going to the park'. 'It's made me so fresh' mixes present perfect and adjective incorrectly; use simple past 'it made me feel refreshed.' 'be the pathway is so peaceful' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'the paths were peaceful.' 'there's some days has some playground playground' has subject-verb agreement and repetition errors; corrected to 'some days there were playgrounds.' Suggestions: use consistent past tense for past routines, choose appropriate nouns ('child' not 'church'), ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition.

× MMM I like to go when I have free time but right now I am very busy so that's why I'm very rarely to go to the past. If I have to chance I want to go every day.

✓ I like to go when I have free time, but right now I am very busy, so I rarely go to the park. If I have the chance I would go every day.

Tense and modal errors: 'I like' is fine for general preference, but 'very rarely to go to the past' is ungrammatical and mixes time references; corrected to 'I rarely go to the park.' 'to the past' and 'past' are incorrect; should be 'park.' 'If I have to chance' has extra 'to' and wrong modal: changed to 'If I have the chance I would go every day' to express hypothetical preference. Suggestions: use correct noun 'park', drop unnecessary infinitive markers, and use appropriate modal ('would') for hypothetical present/future.

× Yes, I would like to see because if we has a lot of pet in the, our cities, uh, the environment will be very peaceful and calm and we can also get the fresh air. So that's why we need to be create more part in our city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks because if we have many plants and trees in our cities, the environment will be peaceful and calm and we will get fresh air. So we need to create more parks in our city.

Several issues: 'we has' is subject-verb agreement (should be 'we have' — also maps to verb agreement but corrected under pronoun/subject use). 'a lot of pet' is incorrect noun choice; likely meant 'plants' or 'trees' or 'green spaces.' 'in the, our cities' has extraneous comma and article. 'we can also get the fresh air' should be 'we will get fresh air' to match condition-result. 'need to be create more part' mixes passive and infinitive; corrected to active 'need to create more parks.' Suggestions: ensure correct subject-verb agreement, choose correct nouns (plants/trees/parks), and use active verb forms for clarity.

× Yes, I want to go to the Disneyland because I have never been dance. I only see that play when I watch movie like a Disneyland, Cinderella and so on. So that's why I really like to go today if I have chance.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Disneyland because I have never been there. I have only seen those stories in movies like Disneyland's Cinderella, and so on. That's why I would really like to go if I have a chance.

Tense and verb form errors: 'have never been dance' is incorrect — 'been' needs a place object ('there') and 'dance' is wrong context. Changed to 'have never been there.' 'I only see that play when I watch movie' mixes present simple with intended experience; changed to present perfect 'I have only seen those stories in movies.' 'like a Disneyland, Cinderella' corrected to 'movies like Disneyland's Cinderella' for clarity. 'go today if I have chance' uses wrong tense/modal and missing article; corrected to 'would really like to go if I have a chance.' Suggestions: use correct verb-object collocations ('been there'), use present perfect for life experience, and include articles ('a chance').