Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak in clear, grammatical sentences and keep answers focused. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary repetition. Work on verb tense, articles, and plural forms (e.g., “I liked”, “the park”, “my friends”).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I loved going to the park as a child because I used to play games there with my friends. For example, we often ran around the garden and picked flowers, which made me very happy and excited.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer and one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid filler words and repetition. Correct verb forms and word order: say “I still like going to parks” and explain when/why you visit using ‘when’ or ‘because’.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit when I feel bored or stressed because the natural scenery and fresh air help me relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give two specific reasons with clear linking words (for example, “because” and “also”). Use correct singular/plural and precise language: “parks,” “places,” “exercise,” “relax.” Avoid unclear phrases like “good manifold” or “parking message areas.”

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I think the city needs more parks because they provide space for exercise and fresh air, and they are quiet places where people can meet and have conversations.

Sugestão: Give a specific example of a park or type of park you want to visit, and explain why with one clear reason. Keep the answer short (1–3 sentences) and avoid repeating previous general statements. Use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park near the university because it has long walking paths and nice views of the river, so it would be perfect for walking and taking photos.

× Is also I really like to go in the park for playing.

✓ I also really liked going to the park to play.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. Use 'I also' at the start, use past tense 'liked' to match 'as a child', and use the gerund 'going' for the activity. Replace 'go in the park for playing' with the natural phrasing 'going to the park to play'.

× I usually used to go with my friend in the park and play there at the garden and sing many flower fishes and enjoying every moment with my friends.

✓ I used to go to the park with my friends and play in the garden, admire the flowers and fish, and enjoy every moment with them.

Multiple errors: 'used to' is sufficient so 'usually used to' is redundant; use plural 'friends' if referring to multiple; preposition 'to the park' and 'in the garden' are correct; 'sing many flower fishes' is nonsensical — likely 'admire the flowers and fish'; change 'enjoying' to finite verb 'enjoy' to match sentence structure. Also keep consistent verb forms.

× That makes me very happy and satisfying when I was child.

✓ That made me very happy and satisfied when I was a child.

Use past tense 'made' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Satisfying' is an adjective describing something that causes satisfaction; the correct adjective for a person is 'satisfied'. Include the article 'a' before 'child'.

× Yeah, I still like to going park now.

✓ Yeah, I still like going to the park now.

'Like to going' mixes infinitive and gerund; use 'like going' or 'like to go'. Add preposition 'to' before 'the park', and include the definite article 'the' for a specific place. No third-person singular verb issue here originally, but the main errors are verb form and preposition/article.

× I did not go always bad when I feel when I feel boring and I want to see something natural and uh, I want to see something beautiful view like I you still like to go on the park now.

✓ I do not always go, but when I feel bored and want to see something natural or beautiful, I still like to go to the park now.

The original repeats phrases and mixes tenses. Use present simple 'do not always go' for current habit. 'Feel boring' is incorrect; use 'feel bored'. 'Something beautiful view' should be 'something beautiful' or 'a beautiful view'. Remove duplicated fragments and use 'go to the park'.

× Well, I really like to see more park in my city because the park are the only place where people usually feel a good manifold.

✓ Well, I would really like to see more parks in my city because parks are the only places where people usually feel refreshed.

Use plural 'parks' and 'places' when talking generally. 'The park are' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'parks are'. 'A good manifold' is incorrect phrasing; likely intended meaning is 'refreshed' or 'comfortable'. Use 'would like to see' for politeness and hypothetical desire.

× Years to go back for exercising, for a great work, a great conversation without any noises so far are really necessary.

✓ They are useful for exercising, for doing work, or for having a quiet conversation without noise.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and uses incorrect prepositions and nouns. 'Years to go back' is unclear; replace with 'They are useful' or 'Parks are good for'. Use 'doing work' or 'exercise' and 'having a quiet conversation' and 'noise' (uncountable). Keep subject-verb agreement.

× And I want to see more parking message areas.

✓ And I want to see more parking and seating areas.

'Parking message areas' is nonsensical. Likely intended 'parking' and 'seating' or 'rest' areas. Provide clear noun phrases; 'parking areas' and 'seating areas' are natural.

× Well, I really like to see more park in my city because the park are the only place where people usually feel a good manifold. Years to go back for exercising, for a great work, a great conversation without any noises so far are really necessary. And I want to see more parking message areas.

✓ (Same as previous) Well, I would really like to see more parks in my city because parks are the only places where people usually feel refreshed. They are useful for exercising, for doing work, or for having quiet conversations without noise. And I want to see more parking and seating areas.

The same repeated paragraph appears twice in the transcript; apply the same corrections as above. Fix pluralization, subject-verb agreement, word choice, and clarity. Improve flow by breaking into clear sentences.