Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I did.") then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid sentence fragments and tense errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was young I often went to the park with my friends to play badminton and other games, which helped me stay active and made me happy.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and vocabulary, and be concise. Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason using linking words. Replace unclear phrases ("going to the box") with the intended word ("going to the park").

Exemplo: Not really. Recently I've been very busy with work, so I work almost every day and don't have enough time to go to the park.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific, well-linked details. Use plural/singular correctly and more precise adjectives. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid filler phrases like "so I think."

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I would like the city to develop more parks into comfortable and attractive spaces with walking paths, exercise equipment, and seating so people can relax and keep fit.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use consistent tense. If referring to a past visit and future plans, separate them clearly and provide specific reasons. Avoid trailing off and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I visited a beautiful park in Europe last year, and I hope to return because it was very clean, well maintained, and much less polluted than parks at home.

× Yes, I like when I was young I used to go to the park to play with my friends and. Play badminton.

✓ Yes, when I was young I liked going to the park to play with my friends and play badminton.

The student mixed present tense 'I like' with past reference 'when I was young' and had a sentence fragment 'Play badminton.' Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame and combine clauses into one complete sentence. Also use the gerund 'going' after 'liked'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for childhood habits and avoid sentence fragments.

× Not really, because recently I busy with work.

✓ Not really, because recently I have been busy with work.

The student used 'I busy' which is missing the auxiliary 'am' and used simple present where a present perfect continuous or present perfect is appropriate for recent ongoing situations. 'Have been busy' indicates a recent ongoing state. Suggestion: use 'have been' + adjective for recent ongoing conditions.

× I need to work almost every day.

✓ I need to work almost every day.

This sentence is acceptable as present simple to express habitual action, so no correction needed. Keep present simple for routines.

× So I didn't have enough time to going to the box.

✓ So I didn't have enough time to go to the park.

After 'didn't' the base form of the verb 'go' must be used, not the gerund 'going'. Also 'the box' appears to be a word choice error; context implies 'the park'. Suggestion: use 'didn't have enough time to' + base verb, and choose correct noun.

× Yes, definitely. And I would like them to develop park, to become more comfortable, beautiful and nice area for people who want to exercise, who want to walk, so I think.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would like them to develop parks to become more comfortable, beautiful areas for people who want to exercise or walk.

Multiple issues: 'develop park' needs plural or article and infinitive form 'develop parks' or 'develop the park', adjective ordering and noun agreement is wrong ('beautiful and nice area' should be 'beautiful areas' and avoid redundant adjectives). Use 'or' rather than repeating 'who want to'. Suggestion: make noun-adjective agreement, use plural if referring to parks in general, and combine relative clauses for conciseness.

× I have been to the park in Europe last year and I hope someday I want to visit there again because there is beautiful park and everything is less pollution and.

✓ I went to a park in Europe last year and I hope I can visit it again someday because the park was beautiful and there was less pollution.

The student mixed present perfect 'have been' with a definite past time expression 'last year'—use simple past 'went'. 'I hope someday I want to visit there again' is awkward; use 'I hope I can visit it again someday'. Also use articles 'a park' and 'the park' and correct 'less pollution' with 'there was less pollution'. Avoid trailing conjunction 'and.' Suggestion: use simple past for actions tied to a specific past time, and ensure proper pronouns and articles for places.