Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, correct grammar (use past tense and articles), and add one specific detail using a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played football with my neighbours there, and because the park had many trees and a playground, I always felt happy and refreshed.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and grammar, remove repetition, and link ideas logically. Give one clear reason and a specific example of what you do in parks now. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax after work. For example, I often walk for 30 minutes and breathe fresh air, which makes me feel calmer and more energetic.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly, avoid hesitations, and give two specific reasons linked with connectors. Use plural/singular correctly and precise vocabulary (e.g., 'green spaces', 'recreation').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for exercise. For instance, new parks would give children a safe area to play and adults a place to relax and meet neighbors.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar and word order, and add a brief reason and a small detail about what you want to do there. Use conditional correctly and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit a Disney park in the future because I'm a big fan of the rides and shows. If I have the chance, I will go with my family and spend a whole day enjoying the attractions.

× Uh, yes. Uh, I like to go park as a child because in the park I play with my friends and my, my neighbors and I like to go to park because when I go to the park there, I feel very fresh and very happy.

✓ Uh, yes. I liked going to the park as a child because in the park I played with my friends and my neighbors, and I liked to go to the park because when I was there I felt very refreshed and very happy.

Issues: singular-plural and article use with 'park' (should be 'the park' or 'parks'), tense consistency for past events (use past tense 'liked', 'played', 'felt'), and word order/word choice ('fresh' -> 'refreshed'). Suggestion: Use 'the park' when referring to a specific place and use past tense verbs to describe childhood habits. Use 'refreshed' instead of 'fresh' to describe a feeling.

× Uh, yes, I still like to going park now because now the time I want to fresh myself, so I take some fresh breath and some fresh air. So I I probably prefer to go to park and spend their time.

✓ Uh, yes, I still like going to the park now because when I want to refresh myself, I take some deep breaths and some fresh air. So I probably prefer to go to the park and spend my time there.

Issues: incorrect verb form after 'like' (use gerund 'going'), missing article 'the' before 'park', incorrect adjective/verb 'fresh myself' (use 'refresh myself'), wrong noun phrase 'fresh breath' -> 'deep breaths', wrong pronoun 'their time' -> 'my time', and duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'like', include 'the' for a specific park, use correct collocations ('refresh myself', 'deep breaths'), and match pronouns to the subject.

× Uh, yes, I would like to see more park in my city because, uh, the, uh, numerous park are very important and crucial part of your city and parks just for refreshment and just for a play for the children and umm.

✓ Uh, yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because numerous parks are a very important and crucial part of the city, and parks are for refreshment and for children to play.

Issues: plural and article errors ('more park' -> 'more parks', 'numerous park' -> 'numerous parks'), article and noun phrase structure ('a very important and crucial part' needs 'a'), incorrect possessive 'your city' (should match speaker 'my city'), and awkward phrasing 'just for a play for the children' -> 'for children to play'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when referring to multiple items, ensure articles match singular noun phrases, and keep possessive consistent.

× Yes, there is a one park I want to go in the future and that will a Disney park because I like very much and this is my very big wish. If I got the chance in the future then I will definitely to go there and fulfill.

✓ Yes, there is one park I want to go to in the future, and that will be a Disney park because I like it very much and it is my greatest wish. If I get the chance in the future, I will definitely go there and make it happen.

Issues: 'there is a one park' incorrect (use 'one park' or 'there is one park'), missing preposition 'go to', missing verb 'be' after 'will', pronoun and collocation errors ('like it very much', 'my very big wish' -> 'my greatest wish'), tense consistency and modal construction ('If I get the chance' rather than 'If I got the chance' for future possibility), and extra 'to' after 'will definitely'. Suggestion: Use 'there is one park' or 'one park I want to visit', include 'to' after 'go', use 'will be', and use correct conditional tense for future possibility; use 'go' not 'to go' after 'will'.