Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Focus on concrete examples and concise phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often rode my bicycle along the paths and played on the swings at the playground. Also, being surrounded by trees and fresh air helped me relax and feel happier.

Sugestão: Use one clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Correct collocations and tenses (e.g., 'when you are dating someone', 'meet new people', 'exercise'). Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and avoid vague endings.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For instance, when I go there with a partner I can talk privately, and I often meet new people on the walking paths. In addition, parks are great places to exercise, such as jogging or doing yoga outdoors.

Sugestão: Clarify your main point with correct vocabulary (e.g., 'parks' not 'Prague' or 'pack'). Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific benefits of having more parks and keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. More parks would give people more choices for relaxation and exercise, and they could reduce crowding at popular green spaces. For example, smaller neighbourhood parks would be great for families with young children.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence naming the park, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repeated fragments. Use correct tense and complete the final idea (e.g., 'see the characters in person and enjoy the shows').

Exemplo: Yes — I would love to visit a Disney park in the future. I grew up watching Disney cartoons, so I want to see the characters in person and enjoy the themed rides and parades. I think it would be a fun and nostalgic experience.

× Like you can ride a bicycle, you can go to the playground, you can running around there and see the new environment is very good for healing yourself.

✓ Like you can ride a bicycle, you can go to the playground, you can run around there, and seeing the new environment is very good for healing yourself.

The clause 'you can running around there' uses the base verb with -ing incorrectly after modal 'can'. After modal verbs (can), the base form of the verb should be used: 'can run'. I also changed 'see the new environment is very good for healing yourself' to 'seeing the new environment is very good for healing yourself' to make the participle phrase link better to the preceding list. Suggestion: after modals use base verbs (can + base verb) and use gerund/participle phrases consistently when listing effects.

× Yeah, I would like to go to the park when I was young because when you go to the park it's have a lot of thing to do.

✓ Yeah, I used to like going to the park when I was young because when you go to the park there are a lot of things to do.

The speaker mixed conditional/modal with past habit and used incorrect verb forms. 'I would like to go to the park when I was young' is unidiomatic for past habit; 'used to like going' or 'I liked going' is correct. 'it's have a lot of thing to do' has subject-verb and number errors: use 'there are' for existence and plural 'things'. Suggestion: use 'used to' or simple past for past habits and 'there is/there are' with correct pluralisation.

× you can running around there and see the new environment is very good for healing yourself.

✓ you can run around there, and seeing the new environment is very good for healing yourself.

After modal 'can' the -ing form is incorrect; use the base verb 'run'. Additionally, the clause 'see the new environment is very good for healing yourself' is awkward; using 'seeing' as a gerund phrase better expresses the effect. Suggestion: use base verb after modals and use gerund phrases for outcomes.

× Yes, I still like going to park because when you dating me someone, you can go to the park for talking to each other, you can meet the new people when you go to the park and you can do like exercise.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because when you are dating someone, you can go to the park to talk to each other, meet new people, and do exercise.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect: 'you dating me someone' is ungrammatical; it should be 'you are dating someone' or 'when you are dating someone'. 'for talking to each other' is better as 'to talk to each other'. 'the new people' should be 'new people' (no definite article). Suggestion: use correct progressive form 'are dating' and infinitive 'to talk' for purpose; drop unnecessary articles.

× It's really good. I'm still like it when.

✓ It's really good. I still like it.

'I'm still like it when' mixes auxiliary and verb forms and ends abruptly. The correct simple present is 'I still like it.' Suggestion: use 'I still like it' to state continuing preference; avoid dangling 'when' without a clause.

× For sure, yeah, I see more Prague in my city. I would like to see more Prague in my city.

✓ For sure, yeah, I'd like to see more parks in my city.

The speaker incorrectly uses 'Prague' (a city name) and singular/plural mismatches. The intended word seems to be 'parks'. Use plural 'parks' when referring to multiple parks. Also use contraction 'I'd like' or 'I would like' for politeness. Suggestion: ensure correct vocabulary and match singular/plural to the meaning.

× Because if you have another pack, a lots of pack in your city, you have a choice and you can shoot like the pack that's good for you.

✓ Because if you have another park, lots of parks in your city, you have a choice and you can choose the park that's good for you.

Many quantifier and word choice errors: 'a lots of pack' should be 'lots of parks' (no 'a' before 'lots' and use plural 'parks'). 'pack' is the wrong word; it should be 'park'. 'shoot like the pack' is incorrect; 'choose the park' fits context. Suggestion: use correct nouns and quantifiers: 'lots of parks' and the verb 'choose'.

× You have less selection for for is not make you done boring that much.

✓ You have more choices, so you are less likely to get bored.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'You have less selection for for is not make you done boring that much' mixes negatives and wrong word forms. A clear, grammatical alternative is 'You have more choices, so you are less likely to get bored.' Suggestion: simplify the sentence and use correct comparative structure and result clause.

× If you would like me to answer, can you can I say like Disney park?

✓ If you would like me to answer, can I say Disneyland?

The sentence duplicates modals 'can you can I' and uses 'like' as a filler. Use a single modal question 'can I say...'. Also 'Disney park' is better phrased as 'Disneyland' or 'a Disney park'. Suggestion: avoid repeating modals and remove filler 'like'.

× Because I'm really like Disney character.

✓ Because I really like Disney characters.

'I'm really like' is wrong: use 'I really like'. 'Disney character' should be plural 'Disney characters' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use proper subject-verb order and plural when referring to characters in general.

× So Disney character is like cartoon when I was young.

✓ Disney characters were like cartoons when I was young.

Tense and agreement problems: speaking about past experience, use past tense 'were' and plural 'characters'. 'Like cartoon' should be 'like cartoons'. Suggestion: match tense to time reference and pluralize countable nouns.

× I I watching it like a lot.

✓ I watched them a lot.

'I I watching' is ungrammatical. To describe past repeated action use simple past 'I watched them a lot' or 'I used to watch them a lot'. 'It' should be 'them' for plural 'characters/cartoons'. Suggestion: use simple past for habitual actions in the past or 'used to' construction.

× And I want to go Disney park to see how character in the in the.

✓ And I want to go to a Disney park to see the characters there.

The original sentence is incomplete and has wrong word order. Add preposition 'to' after 'go', use article 'a', and complete the idea with 'to see the characters there.' Suggestion: ensure sentences are complete with subject, verb, and object, and include necessary prepositions and articles.