Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đã nêu ý chính nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (dùng "pub" thay vì "park"), lặp từ và cấu trúc câu lủng củng. Hãy: 1) Sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng (I liked). 2) Dùng từ vựng chính xác (park, playground, rides). 3) Giảm lặp từ và chia câu hợp lý (topic sentence + 1–2 supporting details). 4) Dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, and). Cụ thể, thực hành nói trong 3-4 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng và không lặp âm tiết.

Exemplo: I liked going to the park with my parents when I was a child because there was a large playground and many games to play. I often tried different rides and play equipment, which made me feel very happy. Those visits were my favourite part of childhood because I could play with other children and spend quality time with my family.

Sugestão: Ý trả lời rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (I still like → I still like going to parks), lặp từ, và dùng từ sai (pub vs park). Luyện cách dùng động từ nguyên mẫu/gerund (I can run / going shopping), thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen (I usually go). Hạn chế liệt kê quá nhiều; chọn 2 lý do cụ thể và nối bằng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park. I usually go with my friends about five times a week because we run and do simple exercises there. It is also convenient for shopping at the small stalls near the park, so it helps me stay fit and socialise.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có quan điểm nhưng khó hiểu do ngữ pháp sai và dùng từ không đúng (parts → parks, stranger → residents/visitors). Cần trình bày rõ lý do với cấu trúc đơn giản: topic sentence + 1-2 supporting details. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (authorities, parks, residents, close together).

Exemplo: I don't think we need more parks in my city because the local authorities have already built many parks. Most parks are close to each other and easy for residents to reach, so adding more would not be necessary right now.

Sugestão: Trả lời lặp, ngữ pháp sai và diễn đạt mơ hồ (approximately on one head?). Cần nói rõ: không có kế hoạch vì đã có một công viên lớn gần nhà — dùng thì hiện tại đơn/tiền hiện tại hoàn thành tùy ngữ cảnh, tránh từ dư thừa, miêu tả cụ thể về công viên (size, features).

Exemplo: No, I don't plan to visit any other parks because there is a very large and beautiful park near my home. It has wide lawns, walking paths and a lake, so I usually go there whenever I want to relax.

× When I was a child, I really like to to go to pub with my parents because they have many game, a game amenity which I can play and after that I feel so over the moon and I I think it's the best place in my child.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked to go to the park with my parents because they had many games and play facilities which I could use; after that I felt so over the moon and I thought it was the best place in my childhood.

The student mixes past and present tense; when describing past habitual actions, use past simple (liked, went, had, could, felt, thought). Also 'pub' is wrong contextually; likely 'park'. 'Game' should be plural 'games' and 'a game amenity' should be 'play facilities'. Use 'in my childhood' or 'during my childhood' and correct repeated words. Suggestion: consistently use past simple when talking about past events and choose correct nouns (park, games).

× Currently I still like going to pubs because in there I can running, I can run, I can go shopping and with my friends I I usually go there five times a week because it's a good way to improve my muscle and doing exercise.

✓ Currently I still like going to parks because there I can run, go shopping, and with my friends I usually go there five times a week because it's a good way to improve my muscles and get some exercise.

Prepositions and verb forms are incorrect: use 'there' rather than 'in there' for general location. 'Can running' is incorrect; use base verb after modal or no modal ('can run'). 'Muscle' should be plural 'muscles'. 'Doing exercise' should be 'get some exercise' or 'exercise'. Also 'pubs' likely should be 'parks' given context. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('there') and verb forms after modals (can + base verb).

× MMM, I don't think so, because my city, the authority build a lot of parts is demand for the stranger and in there in the distance between two parts is very near which I can go.

✓ Mm, I don't think so, because in my city the authorities have built many parks to meet the needs of visitors, and the distance between two parks is very short so I can walk between them.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems and unclear phrasing. 'Authority build a lot of parts' is ungrammatical; use 'authorities have built many parks'. 'is demand for the stranger' should be 'to meet the needs of visitors' or 'for strangers'. 'In there in the distance between two parts is very near' should be 'the distance between two parks is very short'. Suggestion: break complex ideas into clearer clauses, use correct nouns (parks), pluralize subjects (authorities) and use present perfect forcompleted actions affecting present (have built).

× Currently I I think no, because near my home have a park is so very large and I think it's it's approximately on one head. It's very, so large and I think it's the beautiful park.

✓ At the moment I don't think so, because near my home there is a very large park and I think it is one of the best. It is very large and I think it is a beautiful park.

Tenses and subject-verb structures are wrong: use 'I don't think so' for present opinion. 'Near my home have a park' should be 'near my home there is a park' (there be structure). 'Approximately on one head' is unclear; likely intended 'one of the best'. Repetition of 'it's' should be avoided. Suggestion: use 'there is' to state existence and common expressions like 'one of the best'; keep sentences concise.