Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement), pronunciation of key words, and clarity. Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were fun and relaxing. For example, I enjoyed the swings and slides, and I often played there with my friends every afternoon. Because of that, parks were one of my favorite places to spend free time.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and more natural phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then add a specific condition or frequency using linking words like 'however' or 'sometimes'. Avoid contractions that confuse meaning. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: I don't go to parks very often now because I am 19 and usually busy. However, I sometimes visit parks when I am with a child or a younger relative so they can play.

Sugestão: Make the reason more specific and correct grammar (remove extra words, use 'heal' → 'refresh' or 'relax'). Use linking words ('because', 'for example') and provide a short example of how parks benefit you or the community.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in our city because they help me relax and improve people's quality of life. For example, I enjoy watching children play and families exercising, which makes neighborhoods feel friendlier.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and a concise reason. If you have no specific park in mind, say so and then give a brief explanation of future interest (e.g., comparing parks). Use correct phrasing and linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

Exemplo: I don't have any particular park in mind right now, but I would like to visit parks in different districts or other countries in the future. For instance, I would be interested in comparing how parks in the Philippines are designed compared with parks abroad.

× When I was a child I love going parts since it's since it's enjoyable.

✓ When I was a child I loved going to parks because it was enjoyable.

The sentence mixes past context 'When I was a child' with present tense 'love' and has plural/spelling errors. Use past tense 'loved' to match 'was a child', change 'parts' to 'parks', add 'to' before 'parks', replace 'since it's since it's enjoyable' with 'because it was enjoyable' for clarity and correct tense. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent with time markers and check spelling.

× Aside from that it heal.

✓ Aside from that, it was healing.

The original lacks subject-verb agreement and correct tense. 'Heal' is present base form; in past context use 'was healing' or 'healed' depending on meaning. Adding a comma improves flow. Suggestion: match tense and use appropriate adjective or verb form ('healed' or 'was healing' or 'felt healing').

× Every child loves going to park because it has playground.

✓ Every child loves going to the park because it has a playground.

English requires the definite article 'the' before a singular common noun used generally in this context, and 'a playground' needs the indefinite article. Also 'park' should be singular with article. Suggestion: use 'the park' for a general place and 'a playground' for one playground.

× Now I won't go to park since I'm already 19 years old and but maybe I still go when I'm with a kid or a children.

✓ Now I don't go to the park since I'm already 19 years old, but I might still go when I'm with a child or children.

The sentence mixes 'won't' (future) incorrectly with present-time statement; use present 'don't go' to describe current habit. Add 'the' before 'park'. 'But' and 'and' are redundant; choose one. Use 'might' as a modal for possibility. Use 'a child' or 'children' (not 'a children'). Suggestion: keep consistent tense for habitual actions and correct article/pronoun forms.

× Yes I would like to see more parks in our city since sometimes parks it heals me and it's enjoyable specially looking at the kids or the children enjoy playing at the parks.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city because sometimes parks heal me and it's enjoyable, especially watching children play in the parks.

Remove redundant pronoun 'it' after 'parks'; use plural verb 'heal' to agree with plural subject 'parks'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. Use 'watching children play' instead of 'looking at the kids or the children enjoy playing' to form a correct clause. Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns and use correct adverb forms and verb agreement.

× No, I don't have parks want to go or maybe on the parks and districts so that I could see what's the difference of the works of the Philippines and also the parks of the other countries.

✓ No, I don't have any specific park I want to go to, or maybe I would visit parks in different districts so that I could see the difference between parks in the Philippines and parks in other countries.

The original has missing articles and incorrect word order. Use 'any specific park' and 'want to go to'. 'On the parks and districts' is incorrect; use 'in different districts'. Use 'the difference between X and Y' structure rather than 'what's the difference of the works of the Philippines'. 'Parks in other countries' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct articles, prepositions ('in' not 'on'), and comparative structure 'difference between'.