Parks— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Candidato

Did you like going to park as a child?

Examinador

Do you still like going to parks now?

Candidato

Do you still like going to park now?

Examinador

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Candidato

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Examinador

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Candidato

Yes, there is a fog that I want to go uh, there is a city Gujola that I live uh, there is a theme park there. I want to go daily. There is a swings that I want to take.

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Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Pontuação: 20.0

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear statement, use correct grammar (plural 'parks' and past tense), and add one or two brief supporting details. Keep responses natural and avoid repeating the examiner's question.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks a lot when I was a child. For example, I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, which made weekends very fun.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Pontuação: 20.0

Sugestão: Respond directly using present tense and give a specific reason or example. Use correct noun form 'parks' and avoid echoing the examiner's wording.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they offer fresh air and a quiet place to relax; last week I walked in a nearby park to read a book and unwind.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Pontuação: 15.0

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion (yes/no) with reasons and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating the question.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they improve residents' health and provide spaces for children to play; for instance, a new park could include a playground and benches for families.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: Give a concise, clear response: state the place, correct the nouns and verb forms, and add one or two specific details (why and what you will do). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

Exemplo: Yes. There is a theme park in a nearby city called Gujola that I would like to visit. I want to try the swings and other rides because they look exciting, and I plan to go there with my friends next month.

Gramática

Article errors

× Did you like going to park as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The noun 'park' is a countable singular noun; when speaking in general about visiting such places as a child, use the plural 'parks' or the article 'the' with singular. Since the examiner's question uses 'parks', the student should match that general plural form. Suggestion: use plural for general habits (e.g., 'going to parks') or include an article for singular (e.g., 'going to the park').

Article errors

× Do you still like going to park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

Same issue as above: 'park' is a countable noun. For general activities use the plural 'parks' or 'the park'. The examiner used 'parks', so the student should also use the plural. Suggestion: say 'going to parks' for general preference or 'going to the park' for a specific place.

No error (matches question)

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

This sentence is correct and matches the examiner's question. No grammatical correction is needed.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, there is a fog that I want to go uh, there is a city Gujola that I live uh, there is a theme park there. I want to go daily. There is a swings that I want to take.

✓ Yes, there is a foggy area that I want to visit. There is a city called Gujola where I live and it has a theme park. I want to go there daily. There are swings I want to use.

Multiple issues: 'there is a fog' may be intended as 'foggy area' or 'a fog' but context requires 'foggy area' or 'fog' with different structure. 'a city Gujola' needs the phrase 'a city called Gujola' or 'the city Gujola'. 'that I live' should be 'where I live' to indicate location. 'There is a swings' is subject-verb agreement and article/count noun error: 'swings' is plural so use 'there are swings' or singular 'a swing'. Also 'I want to take' is unnatural for using swings; use 'I want to use' or 'I want to go on the swings'. Suggestions: use 'there is/there are' correctly according to singular/plural, use 'called' for naming a place, and use 'where' for location clauses; choose appropriate verbs for activities (visit/use/go on).

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