Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and tense consistency, use a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect plural forms (e.g., "cities").

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My family and I used to spend every Sunday at the largest park in my city, where I played on the swings and walked my dog along the lake. Because the park had a playground and many trees, it became our favorite weekend spot.

Sugestão: Make the answer more coherent by using linking words and correct verb forms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain frequency and a specific reason or activity. Keep sentences concise and fix tense errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often go jogging there with my friends after school, and afterwards we usually eat at a small restaurant next to the park. Because the route is shaded and the restaurant is convenient, it has become our regular meeting place.

Sugestão: Use formal language (avoid "wanna"), correct grammar and plurals, and give a clear opinion with a brief reason. If giving a conditional, state it logically with linking words like "however" or "unless".

Exemplo: Not really — there are already many parks in my city, so I don't feel another one is necessary. However, if a new park offered unique features like a large lake or themed gardens, I would certainly visit it.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples of parks or countries you want to visit. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "spots" not "spark"), grammar, and use linking words to explain reasons or feelings.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit famous parks abroad, such as Central Park in New York and Stanley Park in Vancouver. I have seen photos of these places online, and they look beautiful and full of interesting activities, so visiting them is a dream of mine.

× I love going to park with my family.

✓ I love going to the park with my family.

Use the definite article 'the' before a specific place like 'park' when both speaker and listener understand which park is meant; also English commonly uses 'the park' for general activity visits.

× We always hang out there and I have my dog, so I often take my dog for a while after school.

✓ We always hang out there, and I have a dog, so I often take my dog for a walk after school.

'A dog' is more natural than 'my dog' when first introducing; 'for a while' is incorrect collocation for walking a dog—use 'for a walk.' Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× I think there's a very famous park in my cities.

✓ I think there's a very famous park in my city.

'Cities' is plural while 'a park' is singular; use 'city' to match singular noun. Alternatively, use 'cities' with a plural noun like 'parks.'

× Yes I do, I go for jogging with my friends after school there was a very fun and after there was a restaurant near the park so we often go there.

✓ Yes, I do. I go jogging with my friends after school; it is very fun, and there is a restaurant near the park so we often go there.

Multiple tense and structure problems: use present simple 'go jogging' not 'go for jogging.' Separate ideas into sentences or use punctuation; use present 'is' for current facts rather than past 'was.'

× I don't think I wanna see more parks in my cities anymore because there were lots of it now, but if the the new one maybe I would like to go.

✓ I don't think I want to see more parks in my city anymore because there are already lots now, but if there is a new one I might like to go.

Avoid informal 'wanna' in formal speech—use 'want to.' Match singular/plural: 'cities' vs 'city' and use 'there are' for plural existence. 'Lots of it' is incorrect; use 'lots' or 'many.' Use 'if there is a new one' and conditional 'might' instead of 'maybe I would.' Remove duplicate 'the.'

× Yes I do, I want to visit some parks that are not in my cities or not in my country too.

✓ Yes, I do. I want to visit some parks that are not in my city or even not in my country.

Use singular 'city' to match speaker's location; 'even' clarifies inclusion. Keep present simple 'want' for future intention; avoid double negatives like 'not in my cities or not in my country.'

× I have seen many spark on Internet that list looks very prettiest and amazing.

✓ I have seen many parks on the Internet that look very pretty and amazing.

'Spark' is a typo for 'parks.' Use 'the Internet' with the definite article. 'That list looks very prettiest' is ungrammatical: use 'that look very pretty and amazing' to match plural 'parks' and correct comparative usage.

× That is one of my dream to visit many pretty place.

✓ That is one of my dreams: to visit many pretty places.

Use plural 'dreams' with 'one of,' and plural 'places.' Use a colon or 'to' to introduce the infinitive purpose. Ensure noun number agreement and proper infinitive phrasing.