Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise: open with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. It was always full of joy and entertainment, and I often met friends there. For example, we used to play football on weekends, which made those visits memorable.

Sugestão: Respond directly and naturally: start with a clear statement about your current habit, remove fillers, and give a specific reason or brief example using a linking word (e.g., because, so). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I don’t go to the park very often nowadays because life is very busy. However, I still enjoy visiting parks when I have free time, for instance on Sunday mornings.

Sugestão: Make the response clear and grammatically correct: answer directly, avoid hesitation, and provide one specific reason or benefit with a linking word. Use correct vocabulary (parks, not parts) and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space and places for exercise. For example, more parks would give families affordable options for weekend outings.

Sugestão: Give a clear, specific reply: state which parks you mean and list a couple of concrete features using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., fruitful collapse) and keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to visit the indoor parks in shopping malls because they offer many facilities. For example, they often have bicycle tracks, play areas for children and several restaurants, so a visit would be fun and convenient.

× I used to go to the park as a child. Uh, since, uh, it was uh, an activity full of joy and entertainment, uh, for me and uh, I can find different friends.

✓ I used to go to the park as a child because it was an activity full of joy and entertainment for me, and I could make different friends.

The original sentence mixes past context with a present modal 'can'. In a past narrative, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency (verb in the present participle form issue as listed refers to incorrect verb form usage). Also unnecessary filler words were removed and conjunctions restructured for clarity. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and avoid filler sounds like 'uh' in formal answers.

× Suddenly I go to the park. Today's life is, uh, so busy and, uh, harsh, uh, so I don't find enough time to spend in parks, but I like to be.

✓ I rarely go to the park nowadays. Life today is so busy and stressful, so I don't have enough time to spend in parks, but I would like to.

The sentence used 'Suddenly I go' which is incorrect for describing a rare or infrequent action; 'rarely go' or 'don't often go' fits. 'Today's life is...harsh' is awkward; 'stressful' is more natural. 'I don't find enough time' is acceptable but 'I don't have enough time' is more idiomatic. 'but I like to be' is incomplete and unclear; change to 'but I would like to' to express desire. Maintain present tense for current habits.

× Of course, my city owns a variety of parts which I want to visit, but uh. My I was busy scheduled.

✓ Of course, my city has a variety of parks that I want to visit, but I was busy.

'My city owns' is unnatural; 'my city has' is the correct verb for possession. 'parts' is a misspelling of 'parks'. The second clause 'My I was busy scheduled' contains pronoun and word-order errors; correct form is 'I was busy' or 'I had a busy schedule.' Suggestion: use 'has' for cities possessing features, correct spelling, and use proper word order: subject + verb + complement.

× Yes, parks in some mall is so fascinating because they have different kinds of entertainments and facilities, such as bicycle riding. A fruitful collapse and restaurants. I want to visit them.

✓ Yes, the parks in some malls are fascinating because they have different kinds of entertainment and facilities, such as bicycle riding, playgrounds, and restaurants. I want to visit them.

Several issues: 'parks in some mall' should be 'parks in some malls' (plural and correct preposition use with plural noun). 'is' should agree with plural 'parks' so use 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'entertainments' is uncountable here; use 'entertainment'. 'A fruitful collapse' is nonsense—likely intended 'playgrounds' or 'a children's play area'; replaced with 'playgrounds'. Also combined fragments into one coherent sentence. Suggestion: ensure correct prepositions and pluralization, use uncountable nouns like 'entertainment' appropriately, and avoid unclear phrases.