Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak in complete, grammatically correct sentences and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by a couple of specific details. Use simple linking words (for example, “because” or “and”) correctly, and avoid repeating ideas. Also correct basic verb tenses and articles (a/the) to sound more natural.

Exemplo: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because I could play football with my friends and run around under the big trees. The park was beautiful and felt like a treat after school, so my whole family often came to watch us play.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give concise reasons and one positive exception. Use correct verb forms and time expressions (e.g., “I don’t have time” not “I don't have a time”). Use linking words like “because” and “but” to connect ideas coherently.

Exemplo: Not really. I don’t have much time to visit parks now because I am busy with work and school, but I sometimes go for a run or play football there when I have a free afternoon.

Sugestão: Answer directly and provide specific reasons and benefits for having more parks. Use linking phrases such as “because,” “so,” and “rather than” to make your points clear. Avoid contradicting words like “no” that confuse the meaning. Use clearer vocabulary: “encourage children to play outside” instead of vague phrases.

Exemplo: Yes. I would like more parks, such as Amor Park, because they offer attractive outdoor spaces where children can play and run rather than staying indoors on PCs or PlayStation. More parks would encourage healthier activities like football and jogging.

Sugestão: Give a clear plan or intention with specific details (who, when, what you will do). Keep sentences concise and use correct possessives and articles (e.g., “my family,” “the park”). Use linking words like “so” or “and” to list activities naturally.

Exemplo: Yes. In the future I want to go to the park with my family — my wife and child — to relax and watch our child play. We would join in activities like playing football with friends and going for a walk together.

× 'Yes, I like to go park when I am child because I got to play with our friend and go to play football on the parked.'

✓ 'Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child because I got to play with my friends and play football in the park.'

'Present tense and pronoun errors: The question asks about childhood, so past tense is appropriate ('liked', 'was a child'). Count nouns need articles: 'the park'. Plural and possessive pronoun errors: 'friends' (plural) and 'my friends' (not 'our friend'). Redundant wording 'go to play' simplified to 'play'. 'On the parked' is incorrect preposition and noun form; use 'in the park'. Suggestion: Use past tense for past habits, use articles with singular count nouns, and match pronouns and plurals correctly.'},{