Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'I used to go to parks when I was younger'). Reduce repetition and add one specific supporting detail (a memory or activity) using a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example'.

Exemplo: I used to go to parks a lot when I was a child because my parents took me there every weekend. For example, my friends and I would play hide-and-seek near the big oak tree, which is a favourite memory.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid hesitations and vague endings. Use plural/forms correctly ('in parks' or 'at the park') and replace fillers like 'or something' with a concrete example.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For instance, my friends and I often meet in the park to discuss our future plans while walking along the trail, which helps us relax and think clearly.

Sugestão: Provide a clear reason and a concise, specific example. Correct pronunciation errors in speech but here focus on grammar: use 'in my area' or 'in my city' and replace 'something green scenery' with 'green spaces' or 'natural scenery'. Use linking words such as 'because' to connect reason and result.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. Because my city has many tall buildings and shopping centres, there are few green spaces; therefore I would like more parks where people can relax and enjoy nature.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and one specific reason or detail. Use correct verb forms ('I would like to go to parks that have a large lake') and avoid filler words like 'maybe' or 'yeah' unless adding nuance. Use a linking word like 'because' to explain why you prefer such parks.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit parks with a large lake because I enjoy sitting by the water and having long conversations with my friends or boyfriend while watching the ducks.

× I used to go park when I was younger and I really like hanging out with my friends at parks and also I I still like going park and work around Paris and talk talk to my friends.

✓ I used to go to parks when I was younger, and I really liked hanging out with my friends in parks. I still like going to parks and walking around Paris and talking to my friends.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'go' and incorrect noun number; inconsistent tense (should use past 'liked' to match 'used to'); 'work around Paris' seems wrong contextually and likely should be 'walking around Paris'; repeated words. Suggestion: Use 'go to' with places, keep plural 'parks' when general, match past tense with 'used to', and use gerund forms correctly for continuous actions.

× Yes I do, before I said I I still like going to parks and hanging out with my friends at park so we usually talk about our future plans or something. Constance.

✓ Yes I do. As I said before, I still like going to parks and hanging out with my friends at parks, so we usually talk about our future plans or other things.

Errors: tense phrasing 'before I said' is awkward; missing article/preposition 'at park' should be 'at parks' or 'in the park'; 'or something' is informal and 'Constance' is unclear. Suggestion: Use 'As I said before' for clarity, maintain plural 'parks' for general statements, and replace vague phrases with 'other things' if needed.

× Yes, I yes I do. I really like to see more parks as though in sour there are so many store buildings and facilities so it's hard to see nature parks or something green scenery. So I really want to see more parks.

✓ Yes, I do. I would really like to see more parks because in our area there are so many store buildings and facilities that it's hard to find natural parks or green scenery. So I really want to see more parks.

Errors: 'as though in sour' is incorrect — should be 'because in our area' (preposition and word choice); 'nature parks' should be 'natural parks' (adjective form); sentence structure and conjunction use are weak. Suggestion: Use 'because' to give reason, 'our area' for location, and 'natural' as adjective describing parks; restructure sentence for clarity.

× Maybe I like to going parks that have a large lake, so I want to sit in front of the lake and talk to my boyfriend or my friend. Yeah.

✓ Maybe I would like to go to parks that have a large lake, so I want to sit by the lake and talk with my boyfriend or my friend.

Errors: 'like to going' mixes infinitive and gerund — should be 'would like to go' or 'like going'; missing preposition 'to' after 'go' and 'in front of the lake' is better as 'by the lake' or 'in front of the lake'; 'talk to' can be 'talk with' for dialogue. Suggestion: Use 'would like to go to' for polite future desire, use correct prepositions, and choose 'by the lake' for natural phrasing.