Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief example using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I enjoyed being close to nature. For example, my family often had weekend picnics there, and I spent hours playing on the swings and climbing frames. Those visits are some of my happiest childhood memories.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and add a specific reason with a linking phrase. Offer a brief contrast or exception to sound more natural. Keep it concise and correct grammar.

Exemplo: Not really — I rarely go to parks now because my current work schedule is very hectic. However, I do try to visit a park occasionally on weekends when I need fresh air or a short walk to relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct grammar; give a specific reason and use linking words for coherence. If you disagree, briefly mention what could be improved instead of repeating general statements.

Exemplo: I don't think we need many more parks because the main park in our city is well maintained and already offers good facilities. That said, it could be improved by adding more lighting and benches for older visitors.

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatical response and avoid unrelated or unclear phrases. If you prefer other activities, state that clearly and offer a brief reason or one example of an alternative place you enjoy.

Exemplo: Not really — I don't have any particular parks in mind because I prefer spending my free time at home or going to the cinema. For instance, I usually choose to watch new films at a nearby theater on weekends.

× Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child because I am a person who like nature and whenever child I love to playing on swing and having picnics with my family.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child because I am a person who likes nature, and when I was a child I loved playing on swings and having picnics with my family.

Errors: 'who like' should be 'who likes' to agree with singular subject 'who' referring to 'I' (third person singular agreement in relative clause). 'whenever child' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was a child'. 'love to playing' mixes infinitive and gerund; use 'loved playing'. 'swing' should be plural 'swings' to match general activity. Suggestion: ensure pronoun agreement, use correct time clause 'when I was a child', choose gerund after 'love/loved', and use plural for repeated activities.

× No, nowadays I don't like to go in parks because of my hectic schedule as I am now not much free as I was in my childhood. So I usually like to spend my time at my home.

✓ No, nowadays I don't like going to parks because of my hectic schedule, as I am not as free as I was in my childhood. So I usually like to spend my time at home.

Errors: 'don't like to go in parks' is awkward; prefer 'don't like going to parks' or 'don't like to go to parks'. 'go in parks' uses wrong preposition 'in' instead of 'to'. 'I am now not much free' is incorrect word order and phrasing; use 'I am not as free'. 'at my home' is unnatural; use 'at home'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and natural verb forms, and maintain comparative structure 'not as ... as'.

× I don't think so because my city has one part and it is well maintained and there are many facilities provided in parks.

✓ I don't think so because my city has a large park that is well maintained, and there are many facilities provided in the parks.

Errors: 'has one part' is unclear; likely meant 'has one park' or 'a large park'. Article missing before 'large park'. Plural consistency: 'facilities provided in parks' needs 'the parks' or 'provided in the park(s)'. Suggestion: choose precise nouns ('park' not 'part'), include articles, and keep number agreement.

× Moreover, it has swings and many other equipments that helps people to enjoy in park.

✓ Moreover, it has swings and many other pieces of equipment that help people enjoy the park.

Errors: 'many other equipments' — 'equipment' is uncountable, so use 'pieces of equipment' or 'equipment'. 'that helps' should be 'that help' to agree with plural 'swings and ... pieces'. 'to enjoy in park' incorrect preposition and form; use 'enjoy the park' or 'enjoy themselves in the park'. Suggestion: use correct count/uncount nouns, subject-verb agreement, and proper prepositions.

× There is no any path that I would like to go in future because I want to spend my time at home and in a movie theater because I am a person who like to watch movies rather than nature.

✓ There is no path that I would like to go to in the future because I want to spend my time at home and in a movie theater, as I am a person who likes to watch movies rather than enjoy nature.

Errors: 'no any' is incorrect; use 'no' or 'not any' or 'there is no path' but better 'no park' maybe. Missing article 'the future' and wrong preposition 'go in future' should be 'go to in the future'. 'who like' should be 'who likes' (subject-verb agreement). 'rather than nature' is awkward; use 'rather than enjoy nature' or 'rather than being in nature'. Suggestion: correct articles, prepositions, and verb agreement; rephrase for clarity.