Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 最初に「Yes, I do.」のように質問へ直接答え、その後に理由を完全な文で説明しましょう。「It is because the beautiful」は文法的に不自然なので、「I enjoy it because beautiful scenery…」の形にします。また、「the picture of liver」は意味が伝わりにくいため、撮影した対象を具体的に述べてください。理由と例をつなぐときは “because” や “For example” を使いましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of beautiful scenery because they remind me of my travels. For example, I visited Kagawa Prefecture this summer and took some photos of a river there.

Sugestão: 「rural areas view」ではなく「views of rural areas」と言うと自然です。どちらを好むかを最初に明確に伝え、その理由を「I feel relaxed because…」のような文で説明してください。「Lula earlier」「Leo forest」など、聞き手に伝わりにくい語は、森・川・海などの一般的で明確な表現に置き換え、具体例を一つ挙げましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they help me feel relaxed. I especially enjoy looking at forests, rivers, and the sea. The peaceful scenery is a nice break from busy city life.

Sugestão: 好みと理由は伝わっています。より自然にするには、国名を繰り返さず、「I prefer views in… to those in…」の形を使いましょう。また、「Japanese one」は複数の景色を指すため「those in Japan」とすると適切です。「dynamic」の意味を具体的に補い、たとえば山や広大な景色に触れると、理由に説得力が出ます。

Exemplo: I prefer views in the United States to those in Japan. The scenery there often feels more dramatic, with vast landscapes and impressive mountains. I find those wide-open views especially memorable.

× It is because the beautiful.

✓ It is because it is beautiful.

The word beautiful is an adjective and cannot follow the as the complement in this sentence. Use a subject and verb before the adjective: it is beautiful.

× The picture of beautiful scenery reminds me of the travels.

✓ The picture of beautiful scenery reminds me of my travels.

The definite article the does not clearly identify which travels are meant. Use the possessive my to show that the speaker is referring to their own travel experiences.

× For example, I went to Kakawa Prefecture this summer and the picture of liver.

✓ For example, I went to Kakawa Prefecture this summer and took a picture of the river.

The second part of the sentence has no verb. Add took to complete the action. The correction also uses the river as the object of the picture-taking phrase.

× I like to see rural areas view.

✓ I like to see views in rural areas.

Rural areas view does not form a grammatical noun phrase. Use views in rural areas to show that the views are located there.

× For example the scene Leo forest or liver and sea.

✓ For example, the scenery includes Leo Forest, a river, and the sea.

This is a sentence fragment because it has no main verb. Add includes to connect the subject, the scenery, with the examples. Use a comma after For example to introduce the example clearly.

× I like American American views rather than Japanese one.

✓ I like American views rather than Japanese ones.

Views is plural, so one cannot refer back to it in the comparison. Use ones to match the plural noun. The repeated American appears to be a speech repetition rather than a grammar error, so it is omitted from the correction.

× It is because the American scenery is far more dynamic compared with Japanese one.

✓ It is because American scenery is far more dynamic than Japanese scenery.

The comparison is clearer and grammatically parallel when scenery is compared with scenery. Use than after the comparative phrase far more dynamic, and repeat scenery rather than using Japanese one.