Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one clear reason. Avoid repeating and restarting phrases such as “I can have treasure, I can treasure,” and finish your thought. Use a natural expression such as “keep the memory” or “look back on the moment.”

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of beautiful views, especially when I’m in the picture too. They help me remember the places I’ve visited and the people I shared those experiences with.

Sugestão: Your preference and supporting details are clear, but the sentence is awkward and the “not only…but also” structure is incomplete. Say “I prefer rural views” and connect your details with a simple phrase such as “I enjoy the greenery and the fresh air.”

Exemplo: I prefer rural views, especially those in the countryside. I enjoy the green fields and trees, and the fresh air makes the atmosphere feel peaceful. It’s a relaxing change from the noise of the city.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and explain what interests you about scenery abroad. Use “views from other countries” rather than “a view from a different country,” and replace the repeated “unfamiliar” with more precise vocabulary. Your final thought is unfinished, so complete it with a specific benefit or example.

Exemplo: I prefer seeing landscapes in other countries because they often look very different from the scenery at home. I enjoy discovering unfamiliar architecture and natural features, such as mountains or coastlines I haven’t seen before. That sense of discovery makes travelling especially exciting for me.

× Yes, I love taking photos of different views especially when I'm also one of the subjects in that view so that I can have treasure, I can treasure that specific photo of me and I can look back I can have something to look

✓ Yes, I love taking photos of different views, especially when I am also one of the subjects in the view, so that I can treasure that specific photo of myself and look back at it.

The answer contains a false start and several clauses joined without clear grammatical connections. The phrase I can have something to look is incomplete. Use one complete clause for each idea, and finish the thought with a complete phrase such as look back at it.

× For me, I prefer viewing the rural areas, especially in the countryside, because not only the view that I can enjoy, its scenery and the greenery of the trees, the plants, but also the cool breeze and atmosphere that it gives

✓ For me, I prefer views of rural areas, especially the countryside, because I can enjoy not only the scenery and greenery of the trees and plants but also the cool breeze and the atmosphere.

Not only and but also should connect parallel parts of the sentence. Here, the original places not only before an incomplete phrase. Put the subject and verb before not only, then make both items in the pair grammatically parallel.

× I much prefer having a view from a different country because different countries have unfamiliar view or unfamiliar vibe in that way it will always be new to me.

✓ I much prefer views from different countries because they have unfamiliar views or unfamiliar vibes, so the experience is always new to me.

Different countries is plural, and the nouns view and vibe are being used generally, so they should be plural too: views and vibes. Check that nouns agree in number with the meaning you intend.

× ...unfamiliar vibe in that way it will always be new to me.

✓ ...unfamiliar vibes, so the experience is always new to me.

The original joins two complete ideas without appropriate punctuation or a clear connecting word. Use a conjunction such as so to show the relationship between the unfamiliar scenery and the new experience.

× Everything that is new to me will always be

✓ That makes each experience feel new to me.

The original ends before the verb be is followed by a required complement, so the thought is incomplete. Finish the clause with the intended description, or remove the unfinished clause and express the idea in a complete sentence.