Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g., "taking aesthetics"). Also watch small spoken fillers like "Yeah" at the end. Aim for up to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often take pictures on vacation to capture landscapes, but I also photograph interesting scenes in my city, especially when the sky looks dramatic. For example, last week I photographed a colourful sunset over the river.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (because, for example, so) and avoid unclear or fragmented phrases (e.g., "viewers," "Skyfall"). Keep sentences complete and coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views when taking photographs. I like the contrast of architecture and light because buildings create interesting shapes and reflections, so city scenes often look more dynamic. For example, I enjoy capturing glass skyscrapers at sunset when the windows reflect the colourful sky.

Sugestão: Answer directly and finish your thought: state your current preference, then explain with specific details and a concrete example. Avoid unfinished sentences and unclear place names. Use linking words like "because" or "however" to show contrast if your preference changed.

Exemplo: I used to prefer views in other countries, mainly because I saw unique landscapes and cityscapes that felt exotic. For instance, I visited a city with dramatic waterfalls and illuminated skyscrapers at night, which left a strong impression on me. However, now I also appreciate scenic spots in my own country for their familiarity and cultural character.

× I do. I really do like taking aesthetics, pictures of views when we're on vacation.

✓ I do. I really like taking aesthetic pictures of views when we're on vacation.

The word 'aesthetics' is a noun; the correct modifier for 'pictures' is the adjective 'aesthetic'. Use adjective + noun ('aesthetic pictures') rather than noun form. Also 'really do like' is redundant; 'really like' is more natural. Suggestion: Replace noun forms used as modifiers with the corresponding adjective (aesthetic).

× But sometimes I do it when I'm in the city here, when I see something interesting or when the sky is really beautiful.

✓ But sometimes I do it when I'm in the city, when I see something interesting, or when the sky is really beautiful.

The original has a redundant 'here' and missing commas for list coordination. This is a sentence structure and punctuation issue; adding commas clarifies the list of conditions. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary words and use commas before 'or' in lists of three or more items. Note: This matches Sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× I really like taking pictures, Yeah.

✓ I really like taking pictures, yeah.

Capitalizing 'Yeah' after a comma is incorrect; 'yeah' as an interjection should be lowercase in mid-sentence. Also the comma is optional; a period could be clearer. Suggestion: Use consistent punctuation and capitalization for interjections. (Tagged as Sentence structure error ID 26.)

× When it comes to taking pictures strictly, I would say I prefer urban areas, cities and viewers with the buildings because when I'm trying to take a picture of a landscape with some beautiful view of the same forest or like the Skyfall, everything's when.

✓ When it comes to taking pictures, I would say I prefer urban areas and cities with interesting buildings, because I like photographing urban landscapes more than forests or waterfalls.

Several problems: 'strictly' is unnecessary and awkward here; 'viewers' is incorrect (likely meant 'views' or 'areas'); 'Skyfall' is not appropriate (probably 'waterfall' or 'skyfall' is incorrect); the clause 'everything's when' is ungrammatical and incomplete. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Suggestion: Simplify the sentence, choose correct nouns ('cities', 'buildings', 'forests', 'waterfalls'), and complete the comparative idea ('more than').

× I used to prefer views in other countries.

✓ I used to prefer views in other countries.

This sentence is grammatically correct as written; 'used to' correctly expresses a past habitual preference. No change needed. Included to show verification of tense. (Tagged as Past tense issue ID 5.)

× I was lucky enough to see a lot of beautiful places like starting from the waterfalls, mountains, ending at like beautiful scenery of the cities of the night in Saint Albind, tall buildings.

✓ I was lucky enough to see many beautiful places, from waterfalls and mountains to the beautiful night scenery of cities like Saint Albind with tall buildings.

Original sentence has awkward listing and incorrect prepositions ('starting from... ending at like'). Use parallel structure 'from... to...' or 'including' to list examples. Also replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for concision and correct word order for 'night scenery of cities'. Suggestion: Use parallel lists and correct prepositions ('from... to...') and concise quantifiers.

× But I learned how.

✓ But I learned how to appreciate the views in my own country.

The original 'But I learned how.' is incomplete and lacks an object or infinitive, making it ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure problem. Suggestion: Complete the idea by adding an infinitive phrase or clause that explains what was learned ('how to appreciate the views in my own country').