Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğal, akıcı ve düzgün cümle yapılarıyla verilmelidir. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve kekelemeler (umm, uh, tekrar eden kelimeler) azaltılmalı; konuya yönelik net bir ana cümle kurulmalı ve ardından 1–2 destekleyici cümleyle sebep veya örnek verilmelidir. Bağlaçlar (for example, especially, also) mantıklı yerlerde kullanılmalı ve kelime seçimi basit fakat doğru olmalıdır. Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümle kuralına uyulmalı.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like capturing sunrises because the light makes the landscape look dramatic and colorful. I also take photos of animals sometimes, as they often add life and interest to a scene.

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğrudan ve düzgün dilbilgisiyle verilmelidir. Tekrar edilen kelimeler ve hatalı fiil kullanımı düzeltilmeli (ör. "rural areas has" → "rural areas have" ya da "the countryside has"). Görsel nedenler açık ve spesifik olmalı (ör. "fresh air, quietness, natural light") ve bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlanmalı. 2–3 cümlede nedeninizi söyleyip kısa bir örnek verin.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside offers fresh air and peaceful scenery that are great for photography. For example, fields and small streams provide natural light and interesting textures that urban areas often lack. I also get more positive feedback when I share these photos online.

Sugestão: Cevap net bir tercih beyanı ve kısa bir açıklama içermelidir. Kararsızlık ve gereksiz tekrarlar kaldırılmalı; nedenler açıkça ifade edilmeli (ör. maliyet, seyahat kısıtlaması) ve karşılaştırma yaparken tutarlı bağlaçlar kullanılmalı. Bir veya iki cümlede tercih ve sebebini belirtin, gerekirse geleceğe yönelik bir niyet ekleyin.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in my own country mainly because I can't travel abroad often due to time and money constraints. However, I find views in other countries very interesting and would love to photograph them if I had the chance in the future.

× I prefer take photo, uh, of different views, especially, uh, especially in the sun rising and shining, uh, shining.

✓ I prefer taking photos of different views, especially at sunrise when the sun is shining.

The verb 'prefer' when followed by another verb should use the -ing form (gerund): 'prefer taking' not 'prefer take'. 'Photo' should be plural as a general activity: 'photos'. Use 'at sunrise' for the event and 'when the sun is shining' for a correct clause structure. Suggestions: practice verbs that follow 'prefer' with -ing and use standard time expressions like 'at sunrise'.

× I prefer take photo photo of them.

✓ I prefer taking photos of them.

Same issue: 'prefer' requires the gerund 'taking' rather than the bare infinitive 'take'. Use plural 'photos' for general reference. Suggestion: memorize that 'prefer + verb' uses 'verb+ing'.

× After that, maybe, uh, I prefer take photo of animals.

✓ After that, maybe I prefer taking photos of animals.

Pronoun/structure repetition and missing gerund: 'I prefer taking' is correct. Also remove extra hesitation words. Suggestion: simplify sentence to 'I prefer taking photos of animals.'

× Animals is animals.

✓ Animals are cute.

The subject 'Animals' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are', not 'is'. Original also repeats words and gives no clear predicate. Suggestion: use 'Animals are cute' or 'They are cute.'

× After that, I prefer I can I can be sure I can show I can show my I can show that that.

✓ After that, I prefer to be able to show my photos.

The original contains repeated fragments and lacks a clear structure. Use the infinitive 'to be able to' for ability and a concise object 'my photos'. Suggestion: plan the intended meaning and form a single clear clause like 'I prefer to be able to show my photos.'

× I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas has has has very good at view.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have very good views.

'Rural areas' is plural so use 'have' not 'has'. Remove repetitions and correct 'very good at view' to 'very good views'. Suggestion: note plural nouns need plural verbs.

× After that rural areas has very fresh air and and while while I while I take a photo a photo of a rural areas.

✓ Also, rural areas have very fresh air, and when I take photos of rural areas I enjoy it.

Use 'have' for plural 'rural areas'. 'When I take photos' is a correct time clause; use plural 'photos' and remove repetition. Suggestion: practice forming time clauses with 'when' and correct verb forms.

× And it can be a it can be very good for tour after that and after that when I shared when I share my my take photo rural areas, other people, other people feedback to.

✓ They can be very good for tourism, and when I share my photos of rural areas other people give feedback.

Sentence has repetitions and incorrect nouns: 'tour' should be 'tourism'. Use 'share my photos' and 'give feedback' (verb + noun) rather than 'feedback to'. Suggestion: avoid repeating phrases and use correct collocations like 'give feedback' and 'photos of rural areas'.

× Especially I prefer weaves in my own country.

✓ Especially, I prefer views in my own country.

Typo 'weaves' should be 'views'. 'In my own country' is correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: check spelling and ensure correct prepositions; here 'in' is correct.

× I my own country because because in other countries, countries I couldn't go, I couldn't go other countries too much.

✓ I prefer my own country because I cannot travel to other countries very often.

Original repeats words and uses incorrect phrasing 'I couldn't go other countries too much'. Use 'cannot travel to other countries very often' to express limited travel. Suggestion: use 'travel to' for visiting countries and 'very often' for frequency.

× But but, but in other countries, countries views are very amazing and interesting.

✓ But views in other countries are very amazing and interesting.

Remove repetition. 'Views in other countries' is the correct noun phrase. No gerund issue here beyond cleaning. Suggestion: keep sentence concise: 'Views in other countries are very interesting.'

× So, so I prefer in other countries, but. But I have to take a take photo in my own country because because I don't I don't have go to abroad.

✓ So I would prefer to take photos in other countries, but I have to take photos in my own country because I don't have the opportunity to go abroad.

Use 'prefer to take' (or 'would prefer to take') for intention. 'Have to take photos in my own country' and 'don't have the opportunity to go abroad' corrects 'I don't have go to abroad'. Suggestion: use 'go abroad' with 'go' without extra particles and use 'have the opportunity' to express ability/opportunity.