Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và câu thiếu logic, dùng từ phù hợp và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng danh từ/động từ chính xác (scape → scenery/landscape). (2) Sửa cụm “I love being Indonesia” thành “I love Indonesia” hoặc “I’m Indonesian”. (3) Tránh lặp từ và làm câu ngắn gọn (tối đa 3–5 câu). (4) Thêm linking word nếu mở rộng ý (e.g. because, so, for example) và nêu ví dụ cụ thể về lúc bạn chụp ảnh.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing the scenery and landscapes near my home, especially flowers, plants and the nearby river. I often take photos to capture special memories because I love living in Indonesia. For example, last weekend I photographed a field of blooming flowers during sunset to remember the peaceful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện phát âm/thay thế từ bị sai và sửa ngữ pháp, cách nối câu để rõ ràng. Cụ thể: (1) Thay các từ sai thành “countryside”, “beautiful scenery”, “fresh air”. (2) Viết câu đúng cấu trúc: chủ ngữ + động từ + lý do. (3) Dùng linking words như “because” và “for example” hợp lý. (4) Tránh tiếng ngắt quãng (um/uh) trong bài thi và giữ độ dài câu phù hợp (2–4 câu).

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because the countryside offers beautiful scenery and fresher air. For example, I enjoy walking by small rivers and open fields; these places help me relax after a busy day.

Sugestão: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, chia động từ và từ vựng, tránh lặp từ và nêu ví dụ rõ ràng. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng “I prefer views in other countries” (not “refer”). (2) Chia động từ đúng: “scenery often looks” → “scenery often looks” and “gives me a sense”. (3) Nêu ví dụ cụ thể, rõ ràng: tên địa điểm, loại kiến trúc, cảm nhận. (4) Giữ câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc, dùng linking words như “because” và “for example”.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because the scenery often looks different from what I see in Vietnam and it gives me a sense of discovery. For example, when I visited mountainous regions abroad, I loved the traditional architecture and unique landscapes, which felt both unusual and memorable.

× I enjoy photographing the sceneries and landscape around my house, especially flowers, plants, and the river nearby.

✓ I enjoy photographing the scenery and landscapes around my house, especially the flowers, the plants, and the nearby river.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use singular. 'Landscape' when meaning different areas should be plural 'landscapes'. Add definite articles 'the' for specific items (flowers, plants, nearby river) and move 'nearby' before 'river' for natural word order. Use these changes to make the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× I often take the pictures to capture special memories because I love being Indonesia.

✓ I often take pictures to capture special memories because I love being Indonesian.

Use 'take pictures' (no definite article) in general statements. 'Being Indonesia' is incorrect: use the adjective 'Indonesian' to describe nationality. Change to 'being Indonesian'.

× I prefer living in the rural areas because the countrysides offer the bitchquest uh sceneries and a trend period are most obvious with the fresh air.

✓ I prefer living in rural areas because the countryside offers the best scenery and the peaceful atmosphere is most noticeable with the fresh air.

Do not use 'the' before general plural 'rural areas' unless specific. 'Countryside' is usually uncountable/singular so 'the countryside offers'. 'Bitchquest' and 'trend period' appear to be mispronunciations; replace with 'best' and 'peaceful atmosphere' respectively. 'Scenery' is uncountable singular. Use 'is most noticeable' for singular subject 'the peaceful atmosphere'. These changes fix noun number and make meaning clear.

× For example, I enjoyed uh working by a small rivers and open fields which have me unwise and re feel relaxed after a busy day.

✓ For example, I enjoy working by small rivers and open fields, which make me feel relaxed after a busy day.

Tense should match habitual preference: use present 'enjoy' not past 'enjoyed'. 'Rivers' plural pairs with 'small rivers' without 'a'. 'Which make me feel relaxed' corrects subject-verb agreement and word order: plural 'rivers and fields' take 'make'. Remove unclear words 'uh', 'unwise', 're'. Use 'feel relaxed'.

× I refer views in another countries because the sceneries often looks very different from what I see in Vietnam and is give me a sense of discovery.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because the scenery often looks very different from what I see in Vietnam and gives me a sense of discovery.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'Other countries' is correct form (not 'another countries'). 'Scenery' is uncountable, singular: 'scenery often looks'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'scenery ... looks' and 'gives me' (not 'is give').

× For example, when I visit visit the mountainous resent with the traditional architecture abroad and the landscape buildings like unit and memorable.

✓ For example, when I visit mountainous regions abroad with traditional architecture, the landscapes and buildings are unique and memorable.

Remove duplicate 'visit'. 'Mountainous regions' is correct for plural areas. 'Resent' likely meant 'region(s)'. Reorder phrase to place 'abroad' after 'regions' and describe 'traditional architecture'. Use 'landscapes and buildings are unique and memorable' to express intended meaning and correct word choice ('unit' -> 'unique').