Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has vocabulary errors and is brief. Replace incorrect words ("painting photos") with correct terms ("taking photographs" or "taking pictures"), add a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the lake, since the changing colors make each picture unique.

Sugestão: Good preference shown but the answer has repetition and limited detail. Use a clear topic sentence, avoid repeated words, and add a specific reason with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "since"). Optionally give one brief example to make it concrete.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For instance, I like photographing old stone cottages and rolling fields, which create a calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: This answer contains a word choice mistake ("videos"). Correct to "views" and make the reply more informative by giving a reason and a short example using a linking word like "because" or "so". Keep it concise and structured.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places and their histories, so I can capture meaningful shots. For example, when I photograph a familiar mountain, I can frame it to show local landmarks that tell a story.

× Yes, I do like painting photos because I can keep good memories.

✓ Yes, I do like taking photos because I can keep good memories.

The student used 'painting photos', which is incorrect word choice. 'Painting' is a noun/verb related to making paintings; the correct collocation with 'take' is 'take photos' or 'take pictures'. Use 'take photos' to mean capturing images. Suggestion: replace 'painting photos' with 'taking photos' or 'taking pictures'. ID:13

× I prefer rural view views which are quaint and natural.

✓ I prefer rural views which are quaint and natural.

The sentence contains a duplicated and incorrect noun form 'rural view views'. The correct plural is 'rural views' to match 'which are quaint and natural'. Ensure noun number matches intended meaning and remove duplication. ID:1

× I prefer videos in my own country because I know more about them.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I know more about them.

The student wrote 'videos' but intended to refer to 'views' (scenery). This is a wrong word choice/lexical error. 'Views' matches the question context about scenery. Replace 'videos' with 'views' to convey the intended meaning. ID:13