Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “prefer to enjoy the view more than taking pictures” and “not really into photographing” say the same). Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'produce pictures with good quality' → 'take good-quality photos').

Exemplo: Not really. I usually prefer to enjoy a scene rather than photograph it because I value the experience more. Also, I don't have a good camera, so I find it hard to take sharp, high-quality photos.

Sugestão: Good structure with a clear preference and supporting details. Improve coherence by using linking words and correct minor phrasing (e.g., 'And I love taking pictures of the sunset or just enjoy' → 'I also enjoy taking pictures of sunsets and breathing the fresh country air'). Limit to at most 4–5 sentences and add one specific example to strengthen the answer.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I love views of rivers, trees and open fields; they feel much more peaceful than the busy city. For example, I recently visited a riverside village where I photographed a spectacular sunset and enjoyed the quiet evening air.

Sugestão: Clarify the topic sentence and correct grammar and word choice. 'Upper share' is unclear; use 'I prefer' or 'I like'. Remove redundancy and fix mistakes ('more many' → 'many more'). Provide one or two concrete reasons and an example to make the answer specific and coherent. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they make me feel connected to my childhood and family trips. For example, seeing the coastal cliffs back home always reminds me of summer holidays, and I think there are many more local places I still want to explore.

× To be honest, I'm not really into photographing.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really into taking photographs.

'Into' is followed by a noun or a gerund that expresses an activity. 'Photographing' is grammatical but sounds odd here; native speakers usually say 'taking photographs' or 'taking pictures'. Suggest using 'taking photographs' for natural phrasing.

× Plus I don't have a very good camera or phone so I find it difficult to produce pictures with good quality.

✓ Plus, I don't have a very good camera or phone, so I find it difficult to produce pictures of good quality.

Use a comma before 'so' joining independent clauses. Also use the prepositional phrase 'of good quality' instead of 'with good quality' for natural English. Adding a comma after 'Plus' improves punctuation.

× And I love taking pictures of the sunset or just enjoy the fresh air of the countryside.

✓ And I love taking pictures of the sunset or just enjoying the fresh air of the countryside.

When coordinating two verb phrases with 'or' after 'I love', both should match in form. 'Taking pictures' is a gerund phrase, so use 'enjoying' not the bare infinitive 'enjoy'. This maintains parallel structure.

× Upper share views in my country because I feel more connected to my country and the local views remind me of my childhood and family trips and I believe that there are more many places that I haven't explored yet.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I feel more connected to it; the local scenery reminds me of my childhood and family trips, and I believe there are many places I haven't explored yet.

Original sentence has several problems: 'Upper share views' is unclear and likely incorrect—replace with 'I prefer views'. Repetition of 'my country' is redundant; use pronoun 'it'. 'Local views' is better as 'local scenery'. 'There are more many places' is ungrammatical; correct is 'there are many places'. Also break into clearer clauses and add punctuation (semicolon/comma) to improve readability and sentence flow.