Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repeating the word “views” too often and correct unclear phrases like “give the subject a different perspective” and the trailing clause. Aim for 2–3 sentences, using precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes because photography helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, when I photograph a coastline I focus on light and texture, which reveals the natural beauty and mood of the place.

Sugestão: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence and smooth linking words (e.g., “in the morning” / “at night”). Remove hesitations and complete your final phrase. Give one specific detail for each preference. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views in the morning because the fresh light highlights greenery and mountains, creating calm, natural scenes. However, at night I enjoy urban views for the vibrant lights and architectural shapes, which feel energetic and photogenic.

Sugestão: Clarify unclear and incorrect words (e.g., “abuse” and “Fuqua” seem wrong). Begin with a direct statement (I prefer ...), then give a clear reason and one short example. Use correct place names and avoid vague adjectives like “luxurious culture” without explanation. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., “it feels” not “it makes me feel”).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially in Hoi An, Vietnam, because the preserved architecture and riverside lanterns remind me of European charm and create a romantic atmosphere.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it gives the subject a different perspective that you can fully understand their different views and also you can see the beauty in other views that.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes because it gives the viewer a different perspective and helps them fully understand those scenes; you can also see the beauty in other views.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and unclear references (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'Subject' is unclear and 'their different views' mismatches 'subject'. Replace 'subject' with 'viewer' and use 'those scenes' for clarity. Combine ideas with conjunctions and punctuation to avoid run-on sentence. Use parallel structure: 'gives the viewer...' and 'helps them...'; avoid ending with 'that'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× During morning I love or I prefer views in rural areas because I see a lot of greenery, mountains and nature, while during night time I love the views in the urban areas, seeing the buildings, the lights coming from the buildings and from the.

✓ In the morning I prefer views in rural areas because I see a lot of greenery, mountains, and natural scenery, while at night I prefer urban views, enjoying the buildings and the lights.

This sentence has multiple preposition and article issues (Grammar Problem Type 11 and 22). Use 'in the morning' and 'at night' for correct time expressions. 'During morning' and 'during night time' are incorrect. 'In the urban areas' should be 'urban views' or 'the urban area' depending on meaning; omit unnecessary articles. Also the phrase 'and from the.' is incomplete; remove or complete it. Combine and parallelize verbs: 'I prefer' both times. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I've been to many countries and I prefer abuse in Vietnam, specifically in Fuqua because it's like Europe and I feel the luxurious culture that makes me feel romantic.

✓ I've been to many countries and I prefer places in Vietnam, specifically in Fukuoka, because it feels a bit like Europe and I enjoy its luxurious atmosphere, which makes me feel romantic.

The original sentence contains wrong word choice and pronoun issues (Grammar Problem Type 12 and 26). 'Prefer abuse' is likely a typo for 'prefer a place' or 'prefer areas'; 'Fuqua' seems to be a misspelling of 'Fukuoka' (a Japanese city) or another place—clarify as 'Fukuoka' if intended. 'It's like Europe' is acceptable but 'I feel the luxurious culture that makes me feel romantic' is awkward; change to 'I enjoy its luxurious atmosphere, which makes me feel romantic' for clarity and correct relative clause use. Ensure consistent subject references and correct nouns. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12