Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I love taking photos of nature') and avoid redundant words.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of landscapes. For example, I often photograph forests and rivers because I enjoy capturing natural light and seasonal changes.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then one specific reason with a linking word. Fix repetition and grammar (e.g. 'because they are close to nature').

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are closer to nature and offer peaceful scenery. For instance, I like photographing fields and small villages where there is less noise and more natural detail.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to organize ideas and give one clear example. Correct grammar (e.g. 'every country has different scenery'). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad because each place offers unique scenery. For example, at home I like photographing local mountains, while when I travel I capture coastal cities to experience different light and architecture.

× Yes I really love to click different type of natures photos as I am a Lechem Nagar nature lover person so that's why I always prefer to click.

✓ Yes, I really love to take different kinds of nature photos because I am a nature lover from Lechem Nagar, so I always prefer to take them.

The sentence uses incorrect verbs and noun forms ('click' as verb for photographing is informal; 'different type of natures photos' is ungrammatical). Also word order and redundancy ('nature lover person') are incorrect. Suggested improvements: use 'take' or 'photograph', use 'different kinds of' or 'different types of', use 'nature photos', and simplify phrases (e.g., 'a nature lover from Lechem Nagar'). Grammar problem type ID:13

× According to my perspective, I love the views of rural rural areas as it is very near to the nature.

✓ According to my perspective, I love the views of rural areas because they are very close to nature.

Repeating 'rural' is an error; 'views of rural areas' requires plural agreement with the pronoun and verb. 'It is very near to the nature' is incorrect: 'nature' is uncountable and needs 'close to nature' without 'the'. Improve by removing repetition, using plural 'they' to match 'views' and 'rural areas', and using 'close to nature'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Well, I prefer both the views of my own country and or the other country because every country have different views, different nature.

✓ Well, I prefer views both from my own country and from other countries because every country has different scenery and different natural features.

The phrase 'and or the other country' is awkward and incorrect; use 'and from other countries'. 'Every country have' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'has'. 'Different nature' is vague; use 'different scenery' or 'different natural features'. Improve by correcting prepositional phrases and verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:13

× So that's why I prefer the different type of I prefer to collecting different type of views like mountains, city areas, urban areas and so on.

✓ So I prefer to collect different types of views such as mountains, city scenes, urban areas, and so on.

The sentence is repetitive and contains singular/plural mismatches: 'different type' should be 'different types', 'I prefer to collecting' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'prefer to collect' or 'prefer collecting'. Also remove redundancy 'So that's why I prefer the different type of I prefer'. Improve by simplifying structure and correcting verb form and plural noun. Grammar problem type ID:1