Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và súc tích: Tránh lặp ý và nói dài dòng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể liên quan. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ: 'photos of lessons or deadlines' nên là 'photos of notes or documents') và dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: 'sceneries' → 'scenery' hoặc 'scenic views'). Hạn chế tối đa 3-4 câu.

Exemplo: No, I don't often take photos of different views. I usually only take pictures when I need to capture notes or documents at school. However, if I visit a particularly scenic place, I might take a few photos to remember it.

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh của câu: Tránh ngắt quãng và câu chưa hoàn thành. Dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng nêu sở thích, rồi dùng 1-2 câu có liên kết (because, for example) giải thích lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: kiến trúc, ánh sáng về đêm). Tránh dùng cụm từ mơ hồ như 'a lot of conditions'.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views, mainly because I enjoy the architecture of skyscrapers and modern buildings. For example, city skylines at night with lights and reflections often look very impressive.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, từ vựng và ý cụ thể: Sửa lỗi số ít/nhữ (view → views, countries → country) và thay từ sai nghĩa ('car grabbers' không phù hợp — có thể là 'traffic' hoặc 'cars'). Nên nói trực tiếp: I prefer views in my country because... và nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể như 'familiar architecture' hoặc 'vibrant city life'. Tránh câu kết không hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with the architecture and city centers. For instance, our skyline and busy streets feel more lively and interesting to me than the places I've seen abroad.

× So I don't really like taking pictures of different views and I just find it useful when I have to take photos of lessons or deadlines in school since if I have a chance I will take photos of beautiful sceneries.

✓ So I don't really like taking pictures of different views, and I just find it useful when I have to take photos of lessons or deadlines at school; if I have the chance I will take photos of beautiful scenery.

The errors include article and noun form choices. 'In school' can remain but 'at school' is more natural for specific school activities. 'If I have a chance' should be 'if I have the chance' for natural phrasing. 'Sceneries' is incorrect because 'scenery' is an uncountable noun meaning 'landscape' or 'view', so no plural form. Use punctuation to separate clauses for clarity. Suggestions: use 'the chance' in this context, use 'scenery' (uncountable), and add commas/semicolon to clarify clauses.

× So I prefer views in big cities because for me there will be a lot of skyscrapers and big buildings that will fascinate me in a lot of conditions. Actually, I find the. Die.

✓ I prefer views in big cities because there are many skyscrapers and large buildings that fascinate me in many situations.

Multiple issues: awkward phrasing and sentence fragments. 'For me there will be a lot of' is wordy and future-tense mismatch; use simple present 'there are many'. 'Big buildings' is better as 'large buildings'. 'That will fascinate me in a lot of conditions' is unnatural; use 'fascinate me in many situations'. The fragment 'Actually, I find the. Die.' is nonsensical and should be removed. Suggestions: use simple present for general preferences, avoid fragments, and choose natural collocations like 'many situations' or 'many cases'.

× So I prefer view in my countries because in my country there will be a lot of big buildings and car grabbers, all skylines or city centres that will be more fascinated than other countries and this building usually.

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are many large buildings, busy streets, skylines and city centres that I find more fascinating than those in other countries.

Several grammatical errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' to match general preference (Singular and plural issue), 'my countries' is incorrect when referring to one country; use 'my country'. 'There will be' is a future-tense construction inappropriate for general statements—use present 'there are'. 'Car grabbers' is not an English term; likely meant 'busy streets' or 'traffic' so replace with natural phrase. 'All skylines or city centres that will be more fascinated than other countries' is ungrammatical: things do not get fascinated; people are fascinated. Use 'I find ... more fascinating than those in other countries' and 'those' refers to plural noun 'skylines/city centres'. Remove 'and this building usually' as it is unclear. Suggestions: use present tense for general truths, match singular/plural appropriately, use correct demonstrative pronouns ('those'), and choose correct nouns ('busy streets' or 'traffic').