Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音と語彙の誤用を直し、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしてください。具体的には「films」は不適切で「photos/images/pictures」を使い、冗長な句（"for their for pre"）や繰り返しを避けます。トピック文の後に理由を1〜2点、接続詞（because / so / therefore）でつなげてください。また発音や文法ミス（"capturing at on camera"）を修正して、最大5文に収めて自然に話せるようリハーサルを行いましょう。

Exemplo: I don't usually like taking photos of views because I'm not confident in my photography skills. Instead, I prefer to enjoy the moment with my own eyes and remember it mentally. However, if a view is very special, I might take one or two pictures for memories.

Sugestão: 内容は良いですが、表現の正確さと語彙を改善してください。発音や語順の誤り（"peaceful of mine"）を修正し、"natural scenery"など正しい語彙を使いましょう。接続詞（however, although, while）や明確な比較表現を入れて流れを整え、詳細（具体的な都市や田舎の特徴）を1点加えると説得力が増します。文は3〜4文にまとめてください。

Exemplo: It depends on my mood. I enjoy urban views for their vibrant atmosphere and convenient facilities, like cafes and museums. However, when I need to relax, I prefer rural scenery because it's quieter and has beautiful natural landscapes such as fields and forests.

Sugestão: 理由は伝わりますが、文法と語順、表現を改善してください。"there are lots of things I knew"は不自然なので"there are many familiar places"などに直し、"reminds me of my childhood"のように前置詞も正しく使いましょう。具体例（故郷の山や祭りなど）を一つ追加すると説得力が上がります。話し方ではためらい語（uh）を減らし、文を2〜3文で簡潔に述べてください。

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because many places are familiar to me and they bring back childhood memories. For example, seeing the old town near my home always reminds me of family festivals and time spent with friends.

× Honestly I don't like taking pictures of films because I'm not good at photography for their for pre Plus I prefer to enjoy the moment with my own eyes rather than capturing at on camera.

✓ Honestly, I don't like taking pictures of films because I'm not good at photography. Also, I prefer to enjoy the moment with my own eyes rather than capturing it on camera.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and cohesion issues: redundant and unclear phrases ('for their for pre'), incorrect word order ('capturing at on camera'), and run-on elements. Break into two sentences to improve clarity, remove nonsense fragments, use 'it' as the object of 'capturing', and place preposition 'on' before 'camera'. Suggestion: simplify complex fragments, check pronoun references, and separate ideas into clear sentences. Suggested practice: rewrite long responses into shorter sentences, identify the main verb and object, and ensure prepositions are adjacent to the noun they modify.

× I think it depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and convenience of the city. On the other hand, when I need peaceful of mine Peace of Mind, I choose rural views for their quietness and natural seasonary.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and convenience of the city. On the other hand, when I need peace of mind, I choose rural views for their quietness and natural scenery.

The phrase 'peaceful of mine Peace of Mind' is a confused adjective/noun ordering and repetition; correct idiom is 'peace of mind'. 'Natural seasonary' is not a word; the correct noun is 'scenery'. Also 'quietness' is acceptable but 'quiet' or 'tranquility' are more natural. Suggestion: learn common noun phrases and idioms (e.g., 'peace of mind'), and use correct nouns ('scenery') for landscapes.

× I prefer the views in my own country because there are lots of things I knew and I think it reminds me that my childhood memories and some great memories that I, uh, spend in my own country.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because there are lots of things I know, and I think they remind me of my childhood and the good times I spent in my country.

The original uses incorrect past tense 'knew' where present 'know' is needed to express current knowledge. 'It reminds me that my childhood memories' has wrong pronoun and structure; use plural 'they remind me of my childhood'. 'Some great memories that I ... spend' mixes tenses and uses base verb 'spend' instead of past 'spent'. Suggestion: match tense to meaning (use present 'know' for current facts), use correct verb forms ('spent' for completed past events), and use 'remind someone of something' construction. Practice rewriting sentences and checking subject-verb consistency.