Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan başla, gereksiz dolgu kelimelerden (uh, um) kaçın ve kısa destekleyici detaylar ver. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzelt; örneğin 'taking picture' yerine 'taking pictures' ve 'my mom learn' yerine 'my mum taught me' kullan. Cümleleri 2-3 kısa cümleyle sınırla ve bağlaçlarla (because, so, for example) mantığı güçlendir.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable scenes. For example, my mum taught me how to compose shots, so I focus on lighting and angles to make photos look better.

Sugestão: Cevap açık ama kelime seçimi ve dilbilgisi hataları var. 'It is feeling more safe' yerine 'they feel safer' ve 'a more beautiful wheels' yerine 'more beautiful views' kullanılmalı. Konu cümlesiyle başlamalı, sonra bir neden ve bir örnek eklemelisin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, for example) kullanarak mantığı netleştir.

Exemplo: I usually prefer rural areas because they feel safer and offer more natural scenery. For example, in the countryside I can photograph fields and rivers without the distraction of traffic.

Sugestão: Cevap karışık ve anlaşılması zor. Açık bir tercih belirt, nedenini söyle ve spesifik örnekler ver. Dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat et: 'other countries' yeterli; 'my countries' yanlış, 'my country' olmalı. 'Save a green lights' ifadesi anlamsız; yerine 'preserve natural environments' gibi net bir ifade kullan. Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimeleri çıkar.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For example, I like visiting coastal towns abroad to photograph unique architecture and natural features, although my own country also has beautiful places to see.

× Yes, I really like the uh, taking picture and my mom learn uh, how I take king picture and so I really interested in this.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures, and my mom taught me how to take good pictures, so I am really interested in this.

Errors: 'like the uh, taking picture' uses an article and awkward structure; after 'like' use the gerund without 'the' and plural noun 'pictures'. 'my mom learn' is present instead of past 'taught' because learning someone in past. 'how I take king picture' has incorrect word 'king', should be 'good', and verb form 'take' is fine. 'I really interested' misses the verb 'am' for adjective complement. Suggestions: Use 'like' + gerund (taking pictures), use plural for general activities, use past tense 'taught' to describe a past action that enabled the skill, choose the correct adjective ('good') and include the linking verb 'am' before 'interested'.

× I usually prefer the rural areas because it is feeling more safe and I think you can catch a more beautiful wheels. Yes.

✓ I usually prefer rural areas because they feel safer, and I think you can capture more beautiful views.

Errors: 'the rural areas' — the article 'the' is unnecessary when speaking generally; 'it is feeling more safe' — 'it' is wrong pronoun for plural 'areas' and 'feeling' should be simple verb 'feel' with comparative 'safer'; 'catch a more beautiful wheels' — 'catch' is incorrect verb for taking photos, 'wheels' is wrong noun; should be 'capture' and 'views' (plural) or 'more beautiful scenery'. Suggestions: Omit 'the' for general nouns, ensure subject agrees with verb ('they feel'), use correct comparative form 'safer', use appropriate verbs for photography ('take' or 'capture') and correct noun 'views' or 'scenery'.

× Uh, I actually prefer the other countries we use, but of course my countries have a good views. But umm, I want to really, I really want to save a green lights. I don't know they mean but.

✓ I actually prefer other countries, but of course my country also has good views. I really want to save green areas; I'm not sure what they mean, though.

Errors: 'the other countries we use' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'other countries' without 'the' and remove 'we use'. 'my countries have a good views' — 'my country' (singular) or 'my countries' is inconsistent; use 'my country also has good views' and remove extra article 'a' before 'good views'. 'I want to save a green lights' — mismatch of count and article; likely meant 'save green areas' or 'save trees/green spaces' and should be plural without 'a'. 'I don't know they mean' — pronoun and word order wrong; use 'I'm not sure what they mean'. Suggestions: Use consistent singular/plural for country, remove unnecessary articles, choose correct nouns for environmental terms ('green areas', 'green spaces'), and use indirect question structure 'what they mean' preceded by 'what' and use 'I'm not sure' for uncertainty.